rate_review Reviews

That was a really good chapter. Talk about an emotional rollercoaster ride for everyone involved. OMG. The fight scene. I had a feeling that it would be fake because Naruto already admitted to Gaara about kissing Sasuke, but still! That was brutal. It contained so many different emotions that you can't help but get lost in the scene. Definately one of my favorite scenes even if it is one of the saddest.

YAY i absolutly love reading this!!!
but i still think gaara and niji are a cute couple, but yes
you should really just keep writing, becuase i love reading it

I just found this story and it is AMAZING! I absolutely love it and can't wait to read more. I really enjoy the way all of the characters are portrayed. The plotline is incredible as well. I love how everything is so complex and yet still makes perfect sense. Please update soon and keep up the good work.

Alright....I know what you're going to say.....ABOUT FREAKING TIME!!!!!! I know, I know, and I have unexcusable reasons for putting it off for this long which I apologise profusely for. Now enough with the kissing ass (ewww,lol) and on to the review. I loved this chapter, it's officially number one on my favorites list. Why you ask? In this one there was just so much depth I felt like I was drowning in it! Which is always a good thing, unless of course I burst into tears which is only ever acceptable on that time of the month. (What is it with me and the numerous references today?) Thank you so much for clearing up the whole Gaara-dad issue, makes sense of why he's so fucked up. Hell if I'd been in his position I would have slit the fucker's throat first chance I got! Your description of how he was feeling, the lonliness, the alienation, only serves to enchant the reader with his character as more than some kid who feels the world took a giant shit on him. I'm glad that Gaara taking into account now what dealing with Neji is doing to him and finally dishing back to Neji what he deserves for being so shitty. Now onto Haku, who since the last 2-3 chapters has come second on my fav list of characters. Besides adding even more to him, you're giving him a backbone and making the reader realize that he's more than just a slut (like moi, *slaps herself on the wrist for that idea now*). The whole realization thing on how Neji is just hurting everyone around him, regardless of the fact that he thinks its for the best, is just making me dislike him as a person right now. BTW, with the way he is now, if he doesn't have a major change I promise you'll be finding me on the fence cheering for Haku and Gaara to get it on. Just imagine it. *in a teleprompter's voice* "And now that moment you've all been waiting for.....the story of two scorned lovers, bound by fate to find happiness with one another, I bring you HAKU AND GAARA!!!!" lol, this enough to convince you that I love it and want more, more, more! Now I'm off to review the next chappie, but I just have to say bravo chica, bravo!

<<<<>>>>Oh forget about me being nice for not reviewing for so long, all that went out the window with the end of chapter 9!!!! You Fucker! I can't believe you just did that, the two of them were together, they love each other and it could have worked out! But no, you just had to have Naruto pull away, it wasn't enough that there's no Gaara/Neji going on right now, no, now there's no Sasuke/Naruto either, are you trying to be funny or do you seriously like torturing me????
<<>>> Okay, actually I completely understand the whole thing about Naruto turning Sasuke down. I mean Sasuke may have liked Naruto longer and let's just admit that Naruto's a bit of a dunce when it comes to the subtlies but really, it's more his fault for not admitting it than it is Naruto's. Of course I'm still under the impression that they both have brain damage at this point in time since they just keep missing each other. I like this chapter b/c now it'll get really interesting, I hope Sasuke will feal guilty when he does PDAs with Gaara so he's forced to go back to Naruto. (Notice the LIKE, in the last sentence, I honestly can't be completely happy when things are fucked up in NaruSasu land). Great job on having that confontation, I'm looking forward to seeing where you go from here. Oh and don't think I missed that Gaara in the basement thing, WTF is going on?lol You had me gasping though when Naruto said 'I'd rather he play Touch the Dick in the bathroom'-LMAO!

Well, I'm pretty sure I'm not one of those reviewers special enough to get the link, which sucks. I'm horrible when it comes to leaving reviews...cuz half the time I don't know what to say!

Poor Sasuke. He really screwed up his chance when he agreed to Gaara's plan. I'm not too happy with Neji right now. He doesn't seem /nearly/ remorseful enough about cheating on Gaara and Gaara finding out. Although I still hope Neji and Gaara do get together in the end!!!

Gee. I feel so sorry for everyone (Gaara, Neji, Haku, Sasuke and Naruto). I just hope that there is a happy ending.

omg......... poor sasuke!

YAY omg you are so good at writing! i think ninji and gaara should stay together, there so cute together
you are doing a very wounderful job writing this, i love reading it

i read your stuff for moments like the end..very good poetry unik. i dont think lee is the camersman..i really dont have any complaints abotu the chapetr good job all around. the gaara neji confrontation was a bit much in terms of drama but still very cool.thanks for putting BG in there he thanks you. haku and neji realationship holds a speacial place in my heart now. i relate with haku on being in love with someone and them not loving you back or not loving you in the sameway. your writing is real and shares thoughts and characters i can relate to. keep writing and putting out gold like this

peace,
Kam