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for Zero Hour!

by Amarukoira

schedule May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it. I loved how Neji was sticking up for Gaara a little. Keep up the good work. I can't wait until next cahpter.
person cirquegirl999
schedule April 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really do love this story. You make each of the characters entertaining and worthwhile at the same time, they're very real in the way they interact with one another and how they feel. I just had to tell you that because a lot of the time authors tend to miss the emotional part of the story or rush through it, which can take away from a fic that could have been wonderful. The dream sequence with Neji and Gaara was fantastic and I like the way you left some things to interpretation, I look forward to seeing how it all pans out as this story continues. Thanks again for posting this, I can't wait for the next chapter!
person cirquegirl999
schedule April 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I freaking love this fic!!!! Normally you just have fics where Neji and Gaara get together and that's the end of it but in this one they've already been an item and are now dealing with the consequences of breaking up, absolutely genius!lol I really love the fact that you didn't make Gaara just a pathetic character with issues (not that he doesn't have them) but you gave him some backbone, nicely done. The hint of Naruto and Sasuke in there adds just the right amount of humor at the appropriate time and makes this all that more interesting. Thank you so much for posting this, I look forward to the next chapter!
person Fish
schedule April 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
your a surprisingly good writer unik and kudos and the story i dont know alot about the naruto universe but as a story it was fantastic you gave the reader insight into gaara struggles to let go of neji(god i hope i spelled that right).but keep writing and sending links to your stories

this story has been approved by john-micheal kamrin Garrett
person oraday
schedule April 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Give me more. This one is pretty good so I definitely want to read more. Can't imagine why Neji would want to dump Gaara, but it sounds like Gaara caused Neji to have to get some therapy. Hm... I wish they were still together... Maybe some flashbacks to hold us over?
person Reyn
schedule April 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I read it and now I'm reviewing! So I wanna see that update by Friday jest like you said!
person chibi
schedule April 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW! I love it! Especially since it's rare that people write Neji/Gaara and I can't help loving this one because it was written really really well. I want to wring Neji's neck in this chapter but it'll get better right? Poor Gaara, man I hope he gets Neji back just a little bit and then bam..SMUT! Love it. Can't wait until you update!