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by sassylion

schedule September 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yeah can't wait!
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person Minjin
schedule September 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i like this really much!!!! Also if its very violent!!! it is Sasunaru right???

Anyway you are a very good writer and i love the way you make all of this see in front of my eyes. I hope you will update soon!!!
schedule September 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
sweet chapter. Can't wait for the next one. Poor Naru-chan. Stupid Sasuke, doesn't even know when he's being tricked.
=)
schedule September 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really love how you've written this story so far and I can't wait to see what happens next. Poor Naruto! Everything seems so hopeless for him right now.
person Raina
schedule September 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Dude, this story is awesome. I can't believe I kept passing over it all this time! Gawds I feel awful for Naruto! How the hell is he going to get out of there, poor thing. I just want to kick everybody's ass!... Except Naruto *huggles* I can't wait for your next chapter!

-Rai
person Rosebud
schedule September 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! It keeps getting better with each chapter! Keep up the awesome job and please update soon! ^^
person leanne
schedule September 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Its incredible and heart wrenching how low Sasuke has allowed himself to fall, I just fill so sick for him. And now he has to torture Naruto and it's fucking with his head in some way and, and it's so everything dark and maybe theres hope, maybe. Maybe Sasuke'l wake up to realize Naruto's what he'd been missing for a very long time despite his obvious cold ruthlessness he's shut away is emostions for the most part. I can hardly wait to see what else is in store for Naruto from the bastard Orochimaru if he thinks he can brake Naruto, well it'll be something to see him try. Naruto be strong! Sasuke do you really think Orochimaru doesn't realize just exactly what Naruto does to you? Kabuto you loyal snake ;(
You got me all hooked up in this story can't wait to read cht 4 and 5
person Rosebud
schedule August 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I loved the new chapter and I CAN'T WAIT to read the next one! ^^
person Rosebud
schedule August 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! I can't wait to read the next chapter!XD
schedule August 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow this is getting good. Poor Naruto. My heart beaks for him. Orochimaru sure is one sick pervert. Is he garnering a thing for Naruto?? I hope he doesn't suffer too much. Its kinda hot in a way but, that isn't the kinda intimacy i want our guy to have forever, u know lol. I hope Sasuke has a burst of conscience and decides to do something. I can't wait till chap 3 is out. I'm glad you are forging on.