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Hmm...I bet Naruto will be reincarnated. Thanks for the update. Loving the story.

Uhh...umm, wow. This is good, no really! It's new, to me, I have never really read this kind of story before and I like it. I would very much like to read more.

OMG!! SASU/NARU! Pleeeease let this be SASU/NARUUU!! I LOVE THIS STORY!! CONTINUE, UPDATE SOON!!

are u going to keep going

Positively delightful chapter! :3 I want to commend you on a job well done~! Hahah! No, seriously. The first chapter was spectacular--the characters weren't THAT OOC. No, really. It could've been worse. I mean, I've read worse--or whatever, yo. Just know that it was good because the language was beautiful. Haven't read that kinda crafty vernacular in a long time (barring the fact that I haven't read any of my classics in a while).

The second chapter though--really threw me in for a loop. Mwhaha, Sasuke~! MWHAHAHAH! His thoughts were soooo 19th century that I laughed and sniggered my ass off. So primitive with your coins and stables, Sasuke. So primitive. :3 Although, I was slightly bewildered to why Naruto wasn't a vampire. Or maybe he is--? He got reborn? Oh well. GO NARUNEJI! Lol. I like any pairing of Naruto so long as he's with a guy. Lord knows that if he's with a girl, it'd be...uhm, weird, least to say.

Don't worry about your story being too cliche or anything. I find it quite original--or at least, original enough, in the sense that it doesn't sound too much like anyone else's story. I'm looking forward to your next few updates! You left me standing at the balls of my feet with that "not-really-a-cliffy" cliffy. :O

NEJINARUSASU! LOL. Make it a threesome if you're having a problem making the pairing you want work. Or choosing any pairing, actually. Works for me all the time, roflmao. Solves my problem--if you get what I mean, heh. This is just a suggestion. I'd like to see NejiNaru, because it's such a nice pairing (not many good fics of it are out there). But SasuNaru would be great too!
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Kiba and Sai are so cute~! (>^~^)>

I'm confused, is Naruto the same Naruto from the past or is this a reincarnation? Or will all be explained at a later time? Also did Gaara get knocked out or did he die? I really enjoyed the added chappie and can't wait to find out whose feet those where.

ja ne till next time and keep up the good work

it was very captivating and even though I was a bit confused at first pinpointing what was going on in the beginning of the chapter I knew it involved a hunt of some sort. so I'm glad that later on it's becoming clear and I'm trying to stop smiling at the thought of Naruto crawling across what appears to be a quikie mart kind of store, fooling no one with his stalking ways. Meh, it's all interesting frankly and can not wait until you update... oh if it is possible could you e-mail me when you update this story again? My e-mail adress is simplywandering@yahoo.com

Thank you

OMG, thank goodness it isn't a cliffhanger or I would have gone crazy and want to break something...I'm glad you updated! I was really interested in this fic and was happy to see the second chapter! ^ ^ Keep 'em rolling!!

How...how do you do it?? I just noticed this story then I saw the name. Anyway, I LOVE how...all old-englishy you've made the speech (I don't know how to explain it). It just reminds me of some of the Jane Austen books I've read, it's awesome. I love where you're going with this.

Please continue!

i loved it and cant wait to read more. please update soon- it's really interesting and for once, i dont mind the ooc.
i love, love, LOVE the relationship between gaara and naruto and cant wait to see more of that.
and before continuing, could you verify the relationships? i know it says sasunaru and gaaranaru and etc. but i want to know if theres one dominant pairing over the others... or if its going to be a three way relationship.. like sasu/naru/gaara for example. naru/itachi doesnt seem like a main pairing so far.. but i can never be sure.
i also want to know if its a dom/sub fic. (the truth is that a seme!naruto irks me.. i prefer him as an uke.. and usually put off the fic until i find out..)

it's fine if you dont want to answer my questions... but i'll probably wait till you're finished with the entire story before continuing if you choose not to. XD

i usually dont review.. but i just had to for this one fic. those writers out there are literally starving the readers.. please continue this little gem.