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May 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
NOES!!!!! evil cliff! I love it please have an update for us soon!
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May 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aaaaargh! Evil! Evil!
You can't stop here!!!!! Update, I demand it!
Thank you for a dark, deep, strange and mezmerising story.
You can't stop here!!!!! Update, I demand it!
Thank you for a dark, deep, strange and mezmerising story.
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May 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Glad to see Naruto stood up for himself! I wonder who left Naruto the candy. Was it Sasuke or maybe Hinata? Those are the only two I can think of that would do it.
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May 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ahh, I've read your three chapters. Wah, I hope you update soon, it's getting too good.
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May 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG, I THINK THAT WAS MY FAVORITE CHAPTER YET!!! *____* I'm so glad Sasuke is finally in the picture, and I CAN'T WAIT for the next chapter!! <3 *GLOMPS* I also love Shikamaru in this chapter. Honestly, he's not one of my favorite characters right now, but in this story I LOVE HIM for being so nice to Naruto, and I think he's really in character, so it makes me like him a little more! :3 Awww, and Ino and Sakura!!! <3 It was SO CUTE to see them standing up for Naruto!!
*SNUGGLES* Good luck on the next chapter! I'll try to be patient until then! XDD
YAY FOR YOUTHFUL ENTHUSIASM!!! ^________^ I can't help it! Your story makes me enthusiastic!! <3
*SNUGGLES* Good luck on the next chapter! I'll try to be patient until then! XDD
YAY FOR YOUTHFUL ENTHUSIASM!!! ^________^ I can't help it! Your story makes me enthusiastic!! <3
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May 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Normally i don't like the "Naruto is picked on by everyone" stories but this one is good. Thank you for not writing the cliche "Naruto hid his pain behind a smile" crap that everyone else does.
I still want to see the people who are mean to him get their come-upance, though.
I still want to see the people who are mean to him get their come-upance, though.
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May 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oi i love this one!!!!
can you please update everyday??????
pretty please??????
>_<
can you please update everyday??????
pretty please??????
>_<
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May 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very good story so far! I wonder how bad Sasuke has had it since he was left in a horrible orphanage. I can't wait till Sasuke and Naruto meet again. :)
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May 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*luffs on you* OMG, OF COURSE THIS CHAPTER WAS TO MY LIKING!! :3 It was soooo freaking cute! I love the way you have Gaara and Naruto interacting! It's just...ADORABLE! And their pasts were both so sad! :/ You did a nice job adapting their tragedies into something more "real world"! It was really convincing, and it fit into the AU setting really well! NICE NICE JOB! I can't wait to read more!
OK, I'LL DEFINITELY CHECK THOSE OUT!! <3
OK, I'LL DEFINITELY CHECK THOSE OUT!! <3
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May 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hey i really like this story, its really good. hope u update soon.