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September 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
EVIL CLIFFIE!!!
-Damp *EVIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIL*
-Damp *EVIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIL*
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September 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
CLIFF HANGER??!!!!
8 months later when this story is updated again we're all going to read: "...[something random]" and are all going to be like "what the heck?" and have to re-read the last chapter again just to remember what the context Sasuke was telling Naruto something or other in. Hehehee... nah, I'm just being a hater. =^^=
I love this story and I can't wait for your next update. I especially love3d in this chapter where Sasuke returned to his car in a mini-emo panic attack. It was such great insite into the character made for a great captured moment of personal reflection. Keep up the good work. You need to get one of your many fans to do some fanart and capter what that photo must have looked like. ^^ It would definatley be something to see. :D
8 months later when this story is updated again we're all going to read: "...[something random]" and are all going to be like "what the heck?" and have to re-read the last chapter again just to remember what the context Sasuke was telling Naruto something or other in. Hehehee... nah, I'm just being a hater. =^^=
I love this story and I can't wait for your next update. I especially love3d in this chapter where Sasuke returned to his car in a mini-emo panic attack. It was such great insite into the character made for a great captured moment of personal reflection. Keep up the good work. You need to get one of your many fans to do some fanart and capter what that photo must have looked like. ^^ It would definatley be something to see. :D
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June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"S-Sasuke?"
"Yeah?"
"To the right..."Naruto gestured and swallowed again. "Do you..."
"What?" his voice was impatient.
"Do you re-"
In the next second Naruto's heart had leaped into his throat, as Sasuke stepped hard on the brakes.
"Shit!"
I think you murdered something when I read that....XD
^_^ It was really nice, though, Sasuke's in with the gang! WOOTAWOOTA!!
"Yeah?"
"To the right..."Naruto gestured and swallowed again. "Do you..."
"What?" his voice was impatient.
"Do you re-"
In the next second Naruto's heart had leaped into his throat, as Sasuke stepped hard on the brakes.
"Shit!"
I think you murdered something when I read that....XD
^_^ It was really nice, though, Sasuke's in with the gang! WOOTAWOOTA!!
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June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Its interesting to see how you've made good descriptions of each character in the story... I'm interested to see how this unfolds... Hope to read the next chappie soon....
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June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
O.M.G... how random...i was listening to all american rejects while i was reading this...Anyways good chap!
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June 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's gettting good. Now I just have to wait patiently for Naruto and Sasuke is get closer, a lot closer. During the beginning of the story, I had cryed thinking about all those people who are so rude to Naruto and Gaara. I actually punched my screen in anger, light enough not to break the screen or my hand of course. Although, I really doubt my screen would break, it would most likely be my hand that gets hurt, no mark even being left on the screen.
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June 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You're right! I can already see some Sasuke growth. =]
Is Gaara ok??! He seems kinda down. I lurv you Gaara. <3
You're doiing a great job. ^___^ Much luffs.
Is Gaara ok??! He seems kinda down. I lurv you Gaara. <3
You're doiing a great job. ^___^ Much luffs.
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June 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG, DEIDARA!!!!! I loved it, and I think you did an awesome job with Sasuke, too. He was cold and sarcastic, but still slightly sensitive. It worked really well. AND OMG DEIDARA!!!!!!
*loves*
*loves*
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June 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice and long. I like Deidara, kind of reminds me of a skit my friend sent to me yesterday... Dei-kun. Damn, Naruto was so close to asking Sasuke if he remembered him from the past. I have a feeling it's going to take a while for it to be revealed. =p
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June 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yaay. This was, again, a good chapter. I could read this fic all day long. :D
When I read that chapter in which Kiba talks about the new art teacher I thought about it for a minute, who could it be. But I have to tell you Deidara would be the last to come to mind. It was a great twist. :D
And Sasuke with a car! Yay, today this is the second time I read it in a fic and it's howt! And he gave his sweater to Naruto... XD I don't know about Naruto, but my mind is pretty dirty, even if it's only a sweater. ^^
I'm so looking forward to the next chapter.
When I read that chapter in which Kiba talks about the new art teacher I thought about it for a minute, who could it be. But I have to tell you Deidara would be the last to come to mind. It was a great twist. :D
And Sasuke with a car! Yay, today this is the second time I read it in a fic and it's howt! And he gave his sweater to Naruto... XD I don't know about Naruto, but my mind is pretty dirty, even if it's only a sweater. ^^
I'm so looking forward to the next chapter.