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I just got done reading this for a second time, and I really enjoy your work. I would have reveiwed the first time I read this but I'm just starting to get into the habit of doing so (forgive me oh great gods of fandom). The only thing I'm a little disapointed about was the lack of Iruka or Kakashi but I can see how they wouldn't really fit well with the flow of the story so forget I mentioned it. So any way I'm off to see if you have any other stories, I hope you do I'm sure I would enjoy reading them.

Hahaha, Im canadian as well, I hate how they say blonde is really spelled blond....its so wrong when there's no e on the end. XDDD


P.S. I love this story to death....TO DEATH!!!

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Just had to read it again.
This is just really amazing.

OH WOWOWOWOW!!!! It's been such a long time since I have read such a great fic such as yours. I'm absolutely addicted! The plot caught my attention and I seriously am so glad to have read it. My heart goes to Naruto and the way you wrote Sasuke made me believe him to be a downright jerk. And HOMG Itachi! I was never a fan of his in the beginning, but I think you might just convert me. What a sweet and caring guy he is....not to mention sexy as hell! *flails* They fit perfectly together in this story. I hope you will continue writing this wonderful fic. Thank you so much for writing this. Can't wait to read more from you. And please keep up the wonderful work! You got me so addicted.....such an awesome plot! :D

Finally! Someone reaps what they sow! I get so sick of stories were the bully-ee (a word?) instantly forgives the bully who's beat up on him for years- its so annoying, it makes me want to reach through the screen and shake the author, while repeatedly asking "What were you thinking?". I loved this story, it was the good kind of a little angsty- the kind were you're just waiting for the other shoe to drop. Thanks for writing!

BEST. FIC. EVER!!!!!!! >_< I was so HAPPY!!! I feel I could explode with happiness and my face hurts from smiling so much. I love you. Please say you'll write more Itachi/Naruto fics! Or any Naruto fic actually...

ARE YOU GOING TO WRITE ANYMORE ITA/NARU? ART & ARTIFICE WAS SUCH A BEAUTIFUL STORY THAT I'M HOPING YOU'LL WRITE MORE. OR IF I CAN A CHALLENGE. HOW ABOUT WRITING AN ARASHI/ITACHI STORY. HOW ABOUT IF HE DIDN'T DIE FROM SEALING THE KYUUBI.
EVEN IF YOU DON'T WRITE ANY OF THOSE TWO. I JUST WANT TO THANK YOU FOR WRITING SUCH AN ENTERTAINING STORY.
I HAVE ENJOYED READING YOUR STORY.
THANKS YOU

Really great story. The ending was really sweet. I wonder if your going to write a sequel to the story.
Probably not. I guess this is just me feeling sad that the story is at an end.

just one thing, in chapter three, kiba never actually gives him name to naruto...but naruto knows his name..if i were kiba i'd be scared