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May 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really, really lie this fic. I'm a sucker for well written ItaNaru and intersting ideas. I like how you're shaping this up and I will be watching it.
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May 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I hate Sasuke. Did I mention that? He's such a superficial bastard in this fic. Argh! He's going to find out Naruto is Kyubbi and do a turn around cause he's hot. People like that make me sick. I do hope that Naru ends up with Itachi in this fic. Sasuke would probably be too afraid of the parents' and peer's disapproval to be gay. Argh!
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May 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe Sasuke told Naru-chan to stay away from Itachi. The little prick. lol. I can't wait to see what happens when he shows up at Naruto's work. Great update. Loved it.
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May 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Everyone (including Sasuke) is drooling over Naruto. WIll they find out that Kyuubi and Naruto are one and the same when Sakura goes for her tattoo? Keep up the good work! This is a cool fic!
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May 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh man! The next chap is gonna be crazy aint it? Sasuke is gonna be red in the face when he puts two and two together. He's the dobe. Anyway, great chap. Can't wait for the next update.
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May 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh boy. I can't wait to see what happens when Sasuke-teme shows up at Shuriken. Maybe Raidou can break his arms instead? It'd be funny as hell to see him tossed out on his ear as soon as he stepped foot in the building.
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May 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This chap was wonderful! This reminds me of my first kiss actually. Reading it, i could feel Naruto's excitement. And i agree about the smex part. The relationship between those two should make a gradual progression. I don't see Naruto going at it with Itachi after one date, especially considering how shy Naruto is, and how willing Itachi seems to be to court him. Very well done. Now i wonder how Sasuke will feel about this.....
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May 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
these last chapters have been buiding up quite nicly
i really like the style you write n and the way you present stuff, though i think i must've told you this like a million times before, i cant help but feel it's just getting better and better each time you type something!
and i agree with you taking it slow, to do stuff fast now would ruin everything you've got untill now.
The way you describe things (the art the kiss)is realistic and strong.
you've done a suberb job!
i really like the style you write n and the way you present stuff, though i think i must've told you this like a million times before, i cant help but feel it's just getting better and better each time you type something!
and i agree with you taking it slow, to do stuff fast now would ruin everything you've got untill now.
The way you describe things (the art the kiss)is realistic and strong.
you've done a suberb job!
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May 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another hot chapter... But I feel like it eventually needs smex... I agree that it could wait to the end, but still... Smex would be nice! O_O;;
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May 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Omg. That was awesome. They are so cute together. I love it. Great update.