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by vanessaclarke

schedule May 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love you for updating so often! Update... more... I LOVE THIS STORY!!

PS: Is there going to be smex? O_O
person emp78
schedule May 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved Sasuke's reaction. lol. That customer seemed to be a bit upset to lose out, too. Can't wait to see what happens on their date.
person jinx
schedule May 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh I can't wait to read about the date.This story is awsome!I love every bit of it.Well except that Sasuke is a bastard.But anyway,keep writing with the same spirit and I'll love you forever!
person kkk
schedule May 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
They're just on the first date & Itachi is getting possessive already. I think thats really hot. I can't wait to find out how Sasuke is going to retaliate finding out about them. Thank you for the update.
person llyoung
schedule May 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to thank you for the very frequent updates. I really enjoy this story.
schedule May 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww this chap was cute! And props for Itachi for not taking any crap from Sasuke. I can't wait to see what'll happen on thier date. Nice job.
person Envi
schedule May 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
....Wait. 'Ntill. Tommorrow?!... I'll be counting down the hours then! And to be honest, i didn't notice the different spellings in pyjamas/pajamas... XD Love Sasuke's reaction to Itachi going on a 'date' with Naru-chan and i have to say, i really, REALLY, enjoy Itachi's less homicidal and insane personality for this story. Keep up the good work and i look forward to reviewing ya later :3 good luck!
schedule May 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ItaxNaru! ItaxNaru! ItaxNaru!!! Love the interaction between the two though there wasn't any of that in this chapter. Can't wait till the end of the year exhibition so that they can see how hot Naru is actually!!!
person llyoung
schedule May 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to let you know that I'm enjoying your story. Thanks for writing.
schedule May 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So Kiba and Hinata huh, how cute! I'm also excited that Naruto has something to be excited about. I hope Itachi will call him...and i hope Sasuke will stop being such an ass. He's totally repressed lol.

There's one small grammatical error i noticed , where i says, "You don't think that's a stretch?" Naruto asked sceptically. It's skeptically. Other than that it was all great. Can't wait for the next update.