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May 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love you. More chapters please! Great story and hope for some Ita/Naru soon! Love this pairing! XD
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May 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ok, seriously, when I started reading the chapter I thought it was good and doubted it could get any better. But is stayed awesome till the very end. I love the way you make Haku and Naruto interact. And the way you keep Itachi strangely in character.
So congratulations!
So congratulations!
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May 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really didn't get into it until he met Itachi & that part was awesome. There's something about Itachi that I really like in this fic. He's still the same confident Itachi that I like but more vocal. He also doesn't come of as arrogant like Sasuke.
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May 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg, loved it again, this thing just keeps getting better and better..
well, i suppose we could say that itachi will be coming home next weekend as well, and that sasuke will be completely pissed off!
well, i suppose we could say that itachi will be coming home next weekend as well, and that sasuke will be completely pissed off!
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May 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh *sigh* Finally they meet! This chap was fantastic. It's so easy to picture Naruto blushing at someone as intense as Itachi is. You're right, Itachi isn't easy to write for, but you are a doing great job. This is fantastic. I can't wait for the next chap. Good job!
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May 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
mmmyeah, i liked them apples. But seriously, i love the plot for this story and i'm just itching to read more DX< I think you managed pretty well on Itachi's less insane and more humane personality, i LURVED it. I really hope you continue to work just as well as you have the previous chapters. Good luck! I shall review your arse another chapter!!!
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May 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was so cute! You do Itachi really well. Im glad he talks more too. Great update.
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May 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
mmm, first of all, i have to say i am a totall ita/naru whoor, especially when Sasuke wants in but can't quite get there. i love sasuke, don't get me wrong, i can't seem to write naruto fic without putting him in, but he's a right bastard, so i also like to see him get a good bit of cummuppance now and then (okay, so i enjoy seeing sasuke unhappy and in pain, but you only hurt the ones you love, right? ^.^) and he really IS being quite the jerk right now, even if it comes off, to me at least, as being a whole lot like pulling little girl's pigtails on the playground, a horribly shy way of acting on his feelings, even if he hasn't come to terms with them yet.
and itachi, well itachi is being a smooth, "uchiha-perfect", smug, cunning bastard, even if he isn't heartless and crazy, which i would say is pretty IC for him, because he is THE hardest naruto character (beside maybe SHika) to keep IC, at least for me anyways.
in short, i loved it all
i hope your muses are kind and we hear more from you soon
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and itachi, well itachi is being a smooth, "uchiha-perfect", smug, cunning bastard, even if he isn't heartless and crazy, which i would say is pretty IC for him, because he is THE hardest naruto character (beside maybe SHika) to keep IC, at least for me anyways.
in short, i loved it all
i hope your muses are kind and we hear more from you soon
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May 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh I like it a lot! I love Ita/Naru pairings and there aren't a whole lot of uber good ones out there. This one promises to be excellent. Loved the chapter.
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May 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Haha that was totally awesome. They finally met. yay. I love Itachi. Naru-chan is so cute when he's blushing. hehe. Great update.