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May 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! I love this chapter!!! Thanks for getting this chapter out so fast. I love the way that Itachi is showing his interest in Naruto. ItaxNaru forever!!! :D
Sasuke is such a spoiled brat and even more so in this fic. I love the fact that Kiba is being 'redeemed' as he is trying to be his own person.
Love to see more. Great job!!!
Sasuke is such a spoiled brat and even more so in this fic. I love the fact that Kiba is being 'redeemed' as he is trying to be his own person.
Love to see more. Great job!!!
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May 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yes I love those apples, and how it is all coming along. Can't wait to see where you go with this!
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May 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I've just read this story and I love it! I really like your Haku. I'm glad you're writing ItaNaru, since there aren't a lot out there. Xoxo.
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May 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
-bounces excitedly- this is such a great read! every time i see this pop up as updated, i jump on it faster than a dog on a bone... or is that a fox on a fan??? hmmm... oh well... im so excited to see what happens next!!!
-direwolflilith
-direwolflilith
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May 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Mostly in scenes like this, it tends to degrade into thinly veiled porn or the like, so it was refreshing that it stayed professional and concerned with aesthetic value, not sexual.
Kenji is sweet, and I really liked the comparison you brought up, especially that you made Naruto brighter than Kenji – I know there are other blondes in the show but Naruto’s hair is practically yellow, so I think he’s in a league of his own. It’s always fun to have Naruto interact with Chibis.
But, what are the consequences of this?
Just 24 hours (or so) to go!
Kenji is sweet, and I really liked the comparison you brought up, especially that you made Naruto brighter than Kenji – I know there are other blondes in the show but Naruto’s hair is practically yellow, so I think he’s in a league of his own. It’s always fun to have Naruto interact with Chibis.
But, what are the consequences of this?
Just 24 hours (or so) to go!
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May 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well written; loved the image of Naruto and Kenji nose to nose. So cute. Looking forward to next update.
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May 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hehe great update.
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May 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chap! Is our blond gonna get some attention here with the photos taken of him since Ino might enter them? And will Itachi see them? Maybe i'm just going on a rant but i'm excited to see how this is gonna go! Everyone needs to see how great Naruto is, don't cha think? Especially the bastard Sasuke. He needs a psychologist. Great chap.
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May 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Like this fic. Is Ino's photo shoot going to center on the kyuubi tattoo, once she sees it? Man, that would be so cool! Anyway, update soon, 'kay?
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May 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love love love it, naru is such a good guy and you've put him perfectly in this context, as for sasuke... welll, hehe, he;s always been kind of a prick, so you wrote him well! I cant wait till itachi makes an appearance, you got me soo wraped about that
please update soon!
i really love what you've got going on here
please update soon!
i really love what you've got going on here