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I absolutely love this fic! I liked Itachi's intro...it made him seem like less of a bastard which I always like, especially in an AU story. Hmmm...I'm sure you plan to have Kiba realize Naruto is Kyuubi ne? Plenty of ways for that to happen, especially the way you ended this chapter. It'd be funny if Kiba had overheard Ino calling blondie Kyuubi. I can't wait for the photo session. Has Ino seen Naruto's tattoo? If not, that's gonna be a helluva big surprise.

This is a great story and so original! I love Ita/Naru!!! MORE PLEASE! XD

I like your Itachi; I don't know if it's what you were aiming for, but the hostility with Sasuke seems mostly one-sided - as in Sasuke's angry/mad at Itachi so Itachi's condescending back.
I'm really glad you wrote a nice Kiba - I don't like it much when authors write some characters one-dimensionally-mean to fill the 'posse' void. But I suppose as you already said, they all have the chance to be redeemed and that I adore! It's one of the things I've always loved about the series, how Naruto gets to people and changes them.
It's a really cool juxtaposition, the way Naruto’s all quiet and secluded in school, but outside he's open and friendly, and the ripples of his effect on people bounces back to his time in school.
Man, do you update well! Usually I'm waiting ages for updates on the better fics - even regular ones - so it's nice that you can be so timely with your chapters.
Anyway, please keep writing…I actually suck at cooking, but thanks for the complement and pics would be awesome.

hehe, you wrote itachi amazingly well, good enough to make sasuke view him as the bad guy while really sasuke's just being a brat

thnx for the lovely fast update and the part where kiba actually helped naru up. oh and i cant wait to read about those pics ino's gonna take!

This chapter was good.Sasuke is a big meanie here(kinda hate him) I hope that you will update soon again.

Aww Kiba's a nice guy.
I wonder if he will find out Kyuubi is Naruto?
Great update. Please continue.

Yea true lol. The Sasuke thing was funny....but still, poor Naruto. Anyway good to know he and Kiba get along. Anyway, can't wait to read more!

Ahh, there are so many possibilities in this story! I really do enjoy reading how everything pans out, and even though some might not like the innocuous things that happen in the chapters, I really enjoy finding out that bit much more about the characters; of course, it could all be relevant and just not apparent yet. But either way, I’m really looking forward to more.
Please keep writing.

Wow, Sasuke's such a bastard. Itachi should give him a good punch when he comes lol. Anyway i like this premise so far. Can't wait to read more.

Ah, very cool.
I can't wait to see what happens next.
Is Sasuke gonna see the pictures? Or, better yet, Itachi? Will Ino get him nude? Is Zabuza a teacher? Is Itachi attending the place Naruto and Haku wanna go?
I don't really expect you to answer those questions, except of course, in time. But, hey, nice to get it off my chest, ya'know?
I really like the way you write, it flows really easily; 'course, that means I read it faster and then it's gone but for re-reads...
So, please, keep writing!