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by vanessaclarke

person Blood Stained Butterfly
schedule May 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story.
I cant wait to see when Itachi comes in.
I want to see what Sasuke does when Itachi and Naruto get together.
Will Sasuke be going to the same school as Naruto and Haku?
I love Ita/Naru pairing.
Update soon please.
person I.Drowned.My.Goldfish
schedule May 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is so interesting! I can't wait to read more, you just have to update really soon or else *glares* Mahaha so scary right?

Well anyway, I haven't really read an Ita/Naru story before, since I personally favor the Sasu/Naru, but Sasuke seems like such an asshole in this one that I can't even imagine them together xD

UPDATE! orrrr you will face the consequences.. or.. however you spell that, NO MORE uhmm.... What kind of stuff do you like? xD
schedule May 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love your idea! Even though character bashing is bad, I am a bit tired of reading fics where Sasuke is horrible to Naruto and ends up with him in the end. I really look forward to your next chapter ^__^
person Envi
schedule May 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Kyyaaaahhh
I lurve this story, hell, it already seems like it has a really good plot flowing and i can't wait to find out what happens next, you know! Keep up the great work and i look forward to the next chapter!
schedule May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really, really want to see where this is going, and you're right, it will be so refreshing if you write Sasuke getting his comeuppance. I've been looking for those sorta fics for ages but they're really hard to find. So I'll be eagerly awaiting each and every update.
I've also really gotten into ItaNaru lately, so how fortuitous this should be posted now, ay?
Anyway, the tatoo design is very cool, and I like your writing style. The introductions have been very smooth - especially Sasuke's - and I like the incorporation of the Kyuubi.
So, please keep writing.
schedule May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh! i instantly fell in love with this story! any ideas as to the pairings? or is this a friendly based type of story with lil to none pairings?
person TrixXx
schedule May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
JEEZ! this is wonderful, Im a total Sasunaru fan but Itanaru is just as good. ^-^
person jinx
schedule May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it so far.I'll read it for sure