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by vanessaclarke

person fan_of_urs
schedule June 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
why does it not surprise me that itachi - the guy who murdered his entire village sans sasuke - get along w/ zabuza? the guy who killed all the graduating Academy students in the village? really, i wonder why..
person rage
schedule May 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was so cute!!!!!!
person Asuka
schedule May 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow liked that story. it was sweet and good hearted you should make more of these!omg god i loved the way you made hakus personaitly in this story and inos, itachi's and of course sasuke's. i loved it!

~Asuka
person Mars
schedule May 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh My God!!!! That was so good...I just read all 22 chaps today they were so Fing good lol You did such a great job...and I bow to you for doing it all in 22 days, YOUR AWESOME!! You wrote it so well (at lest to me) its was like watching it to me lol!

Thank You For Writing This Story ^^
person jess
schedule May 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hooooooooooooooooooooooooooot!!!!! *jumps up and down with joy* wonderful smex scene... *sigh* itachi and naruto are so yummy together! and the prom scene was sweet... but wow. thank you so much for that amazing fic! i love love love love love it! truely awesome! *BIG HUUUUG* thank you a million times over *kisses8 i love you!
person sadistickiss
schedule May 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Holy falafels O_O you wrote a chapter a day!? I didn't know! I thought you had written the entire thing out and decided to post one a day to keep your readers happy. OMFG! My respect for you just shot off the charts O_O... I was in complete, utter awe before - and now... now I'm just gonna POKE you for being so god damn TALENTED! HOLY CRAP! ONE CHAPTER A DAY!!! You are amazing. And they were amazing chapters too. Oh god. Beyond amazing. You... *speechless* ZOMG MARRY ME!!!

This fic was really awesome. My head's kind of messed up from the awesomeness and I can't come up with the correct adjectives so you'll have to forgive me (but still OMFG! YOU'RE SO AMAZING!!! ZAAA!!!). I know I've mentioned before that I absolutely adore how you portrayed Naruto's character, and I REALLY mean it. In the manga, when he's in one of his 'moments' I look at him and I think, "Dude... I wish I could be like him" and that's how I feel reading your story. He was just so... noble and forgiving. Stubborn, yeah, but you made him so... so cool.

And Sasuke. Okay, well, I'll admit, he's a pretty sucky guy in the manga, running off to Orochimaru and almost killing his best friend, but he's Sasuke and I don't think anyone can really HATE him. But this had me getting pretty close. It had me fisting my hands next to the keyboard thinking, "GET THE HELL AWAY FROM NARUTO!!!". So, it's not really that big of a surprise that your scene with Naruto being so nice to Sasuke about his poetry was absolute breathtaking. It made me feel giddy XD. I really liked that scene! One of my favourites!

Itachi was definitely too cool XD! Though, I admit (I'M SORRY!) I thought he was especially cool in the beginning, when they had just met -*snicker* probably because he was more mysterious.

And you awesome, awesome, WONDERFUL author, you drew us art for the fic. Just... Just *LOVES* AHH!! You should rule the world, you should, mm hmm *nods*.

Oh gods. I've written too much. And it's all post-fic high mush. I LOVE YOU! AND YOU SHOULD NEVER EVER STOP WRITING! BECAUSE YOU TOTALLY ROCK AND AHH YOU'RE MY FAVOURITE PERSON! Congratulations on such an great job! Thank you SO MUCH for sharing it with us. *SNUFFLES* ZAILOVEYOU!!!
person sadistickiss
schedule May 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOL.

And the smut was hot.

Yes. Can't forget that. My head's still spinning.
person Ana
schedule May 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Amazing fic. I really really love this couple and I love to see Sasuke lose. :). I can't wait to see the next fic that comes out. I only hope that its not a SasuNaru fic because I've had enough of those. ^.~
~Ana~
person emp78
schedule May 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*stifles nosebleed* The wait was long, but so worth it! Way to end the story!
person llyoung
schedule May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was a beautiful end to a wonderful story. Thank you for writing.