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by vanessaclarke

person defangel
schedule May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey! Thank you for sharing this fabulous story, I absolutely loved every minute of it and I'm really sad to see it end, but you know what they say, all good things must come to an end. anyway thanks again for sharing and I'll definitely be looking out for your works in the future.
schedule May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
SMEX!!! HOT JUICY SMEX! Great ending and lovely way to round out their relationship! Are you considering maybe a little sequel or something or just a follow up one-shot?? Either far in the future or them in college together. Like Sasuke at the end, 'bout time the teme shaped up.

Can't wait for your next story! Love this one to bits!
person Anon
schedule May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story. I loved it,you really don't see enough Itachi/Naruto fics. I and probably the rest of your fans would love it if you did a sequel, especially one with some scenes between Haku and Zabuza, but it's just a suggestion. You did great and I agree with your thoughts on people taking forever to update, but you didn't so good on you.
person Blood Stained Butterfly
schedule May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww. That was so awesome. I can't believe it's over. *wipes away tears*
The lemon was hot. And the ending was so sweet.
Thanks for the fic! It was really great. I enjoyed reading it.
person Bremmington
schedule May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!
*clap clap clap clap clap clap clap clap clap clap clap clap clap clap clap!!!!*
Very Impressive!!!
And a little smuttiness to finnish it off!
BRAVO!
person cutsycat
schedule May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I really liked this story and would love to see more. Is there any chance of a sequel? You know like e of Itachi and Naruto in college and all his new friends and enemies?
person masako
schedule May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was beyond cute and i loved it. thank you for writing the story and being so fast with the updates.
schedule May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW. Sniffles.


That was soooo touching. I feel complete! Hehe. You know, that was one of the few stories were hardly any smut was involved and yet it was quite good and reading it was all worth while for that one scene at the end. Very nice story, very good job. :)
schedule May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
-laughing- god that was so romantic! and naruto sure did show his school to look underneath the underneath! -pumps a fist in the air enthusiasticly- go itachi/naru! long live it forever! lol. sorry couldn't help myself. the ending was very funny too.
schedule May 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hahaha, oh sasuke, you deserved to be taken down that couple of pegs there, im surprised itachi-kun didn't do it sooner really. all the more power to naruto for never kicking him in the nuts, even though he royally deserved it (not that im sure we all wouldn't have enjoyed THAT *is innocent*)

^.^ good show. there's more, i hope?