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holy shit you are amazing! aaaahhhhhhhhhhhh!!! so good! really, i am grinning like an idiot! i am so happy and giddy and this... you... ahh! truely fantastic, your writing never wavers... thank you so much for writing such an ingaging, intense, fun, romantic, hot, sad but mostly wonderful story. itachi was so cool and i like that even he could make mistakes... but it was totally awesome when he threw sasuke off of naruto! he and naruto are completely adorable together! and sasuke's realization at the end was very well written as well, i could feel his sinking guilt and fear and depression. wheee! thank you again, i really love it! I hope that this is not the end and that there are more chapters to come because I would love to read more of this happy happy joyful story! *BIG HUG* i love you!!! ^_^

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I love you. xDDDD OMG, I'm obsessed with this story!!! Poor Sasuke, I hope everything in the end will turn out great... For everyone... I love your writing stylee, it keeps the reader into the story without getting bored one bit! And it's easy to understand. ^_^ May I draw for you?? You have scenes here that caught my attention, and now it won't leave my head. >_> Hey, send me some pics! :DD [http://lalalaout.deviantart.com]<< haven't updated the place lately, >_> but I still go there.

this story is SO COOL! i've never squealed that much :D

Thanks very much for the story. It's a great character study, particularly of Sasuke.

However, I'd particularly like to thank you for updating it so frequently. You have no idea how annoying it is when fanfic writers abandon their stories, or take six months to update them. Or perhaps you do know how annoying it is...
Anyway. It's just fabulous to have a responsible, dedicated person who doesn't leave readers in the lurch. Although I have to say that I would have accepted a weekly update, the daily update was a scrumptious treat!

THANK YOU!

*dreamy smile* That's so sweet... Awwww man, they're so cute together.

I love the way Sasuke acted in this chapter! Especially with the whole desperatino to see 'Naruto's face XP.

I sent you an email about the pics! YOU'RE SO AWESOME! I hope one of them has Naruto with his nine-tails tattoo XD. I'd love to see some of the tattoo designs...

Can't wait for the next chapter!

I'm feeling a bit off, and tired, and just plain out of it so this won't be a very long or good review. So sorry

I'm glad that Sasuke finally knows. And his reaction was good, shows that he isn't completely unsalvageable. The fact that he was relatively mature about it, that he didn't have a tantrum upon finding that Naruto was Kyuubi and that he basically had no chance shows that there's hope for him yet.

I can't wait to see Naruto and Itachi making up. And I can't wait to see Naruto and Sasuke's first meeting after Sasuke found the truth. And also everyone else's reaction to Naruto and also I wonder if he'll wear his hood anymore. Though I guess school is over?

Anyways I can't wait for the making up and for your update tomorrow. And of course to see more of Haku, because I love him:)

Yay. they're back together. and Sasuke realized he's an ass. lol. great update.

I love it! Sasuke finally knows what a bitch he is! YAY! And Itachi got the stick out of his ass too! Double yay!

Can't wait to read more! Luv you!

AWWWW... so sweet! Not the confrontation I was looking for with Itachi and Sasuke, but as he said better to let him stew a bit. ^_^ Very good.