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Their first fight

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Damn it, how could you? I don't want Naruto and Itachi to fight. Naruto's supposed to say 'okay Itachi' and Itachi supposed to gloat and then kick Sasuke's ass :'( But now they're fighting, and Itachi'll probably kick Sasuke's ass anyways just because he's pissed that what he did to Naruto caused them to have their first fight (and I wouldn't be surprised if he let it slip who Naruto really is). I just hope the making up's good. It had better be *glares*

But more seriously, although he is pissing me off I still feel vaguely sorry for Sasuke. He really seems to like Naruto, at least in a slightly less than superficial way. And he is a screwed up dude, obviously. Hopefully he'll turn himself around somehow and things will turn out well for all three of those involved. And Naruto and Itachi will have a lot of nice making up :D

Hey! Although I've started reading this story since chapter 3, only now am I getting off my lazy ass to review it..
SORRY! I enjoyed the first chapters, but as it went on, I got so hooked up! Fluid writing couple with an interesting plot and well-fleshed characters make me weak in the knees, and you added surprising twists to known characters such as Sasuke, like the cherry on top of the cake. ^_^ Amazing how you managed to juggle his bully attitude without falling into downright bashing, specially on the last chapters, where his personality starts to come together more (and this last one... *squee*
All in all... Thank you for giving me such pleasure in reading Art and Artifice.

Poor Naruto :(
I hope there not angry for to long :(
*sob*
x

Ok. You totally can't leave it like that. You need to get writing and finish this story. Hopefully, Itachi will come to his senses and apologize to Naruto and Sasuke seriously needs some help. Maybe he'll at least decide to apply to a school for writing and leave Naruto alone.

Stupid, stupid, stupid, and did i mention STUPID! What in the world was Sasuke thinking!!!! Bad Uchiha. Served him damn right though. And Itachi...as much as i'd like to rant on him, i don't blame him. I wouldn't like anyone kissing my boyfriend either. Still, he could've had a little more tact. Obviously Naruto was already distressed. Poor guy. He just has too big a heart really. I hope both Uchihas can see that. Great chap.

Finally! I've been wating since the first chapter to review. And now that you allow anonymous reviewers I've forgot most of the stuff I wanted to say, typical. *sigh*

Well, I really like this. The way you portray the characters is wonderful. I feel for Naruto, having been picked upon until I got accepted to Upper Secondary School of Visual Arts xD The only difference between me and your Naruto is that I decided to fight back (not literally, but with words) and eventually they got tired of it (or grew up I don't know).

So yeah, I love the fic. The chapter where they went to Kisame's gallery inspired me to paint and I don't usually paint more than one painting every three years (too time-consuming and I'm just lazy). Haku is so cute and I want to smother Itachi. Sasuke is such a blind bastard that I'm amazed how you manage to make him so human despite everything. Great really.

Just so you know, you have one hell of a fan here waiting for your next update :)

Woot! I love this! ^_^
((I wanted to review before but I'm way to lazy to actually get an account))
For some unknown reason I had this fettish with Naruto/Itachi one day and thankfully I found this! It's great! I can't wait to read more! <3's

Sasuke is sick. I really can't wait till he realises that the guy he is bullying like s*** is actually the guy he likes.

P.S. I'm actually trembling with anger now. Great writing to invoke emotions in your readers :)