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by vanessaclarke

schedule May 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Alright! So Kiba knows now huh. Wait....so Itachi's family is gonna go to that art thing and Itachi's going with Naruto...so does that mean Sasuke's gonna be there? Whats going on? Great chap.
schedule May 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So now Kiba knows. LOL can't wait to see Sasuke's reaction when he finds out! I wonder is that happening at the school art fair??? I wonder......love to read your daily updates!!!! :D Hehe I was worried when I didn't see the chapter earlier.
person llyoung
schedule May 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for another interesting chapter.
schedule May 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh..insight into Sasuke's mind. Contrary to what you said, i enjoyed this chap alot! Now i find myself kinda sympathizing with the bastard. Also i'm highly interested in what he did...do we have a little budding writer here who remains unaware of the possibility? That makes me a little happy or excited simply because i'm an aspiring writer myself. At any rate, i hope Sasuke doesn't do something utterly foolish. However if it's something so shockingly good it'd make things ohh so tantalizingly complicated and awesome then that'd be great! Even though im totally rooting for Ita/Naru of course, there's a part of me that wishes Sasuke would show his true self instead of being such a jerk all the time in front of others. What i wonder is if he'll still feel the same way about him once he realizes who it's been all this time. I'm also curious to know why Naruto really doesn't want to say who he is...even for Itachi's sake. Anyway, that was a long enuff rant. Good job.
person emp78
schedule May 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I liked it; it builds up the story. Fleshes it out. Don't worry if there's not a lot of angst, action, smut or whatever. Write it the way you want it. Uodate soon, ne?
schedule May 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well this chapter definitely did have a sense of foreboding about it. Itachi goading Sasuke might not have been a good idea. Now I find myself worried by what Sasuke's planning. I hope it isn't going to be something that might screw up Itachi and Naruto's relationship.

Though it could be leading to the big reveal. Is it leading to the big reveal? That would be cool. I really can't wait for that. But I must say I can understand why Naruto doesn't want to. It does feel safer that way, especially when dealing with people who make you uncomfortable.

I'm like that at work, and really around most people in general. Though for me instead of a physical disguise, I have a more personality oriented one. It feels safer hiding yourself, but it's probably better to be honest and true to yourself.

But back on topic, I really can't wait for Sasuke's reaction. And not only his reaction but Kiba's and Sakura's and others that don't know that he's both. It will be interesting to see.
schedule May 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
No diminished quality that see. Moving a bit slow this chapter but it's great development for Ita-Naru relationship. Hope to read more soon!!! LOVE YOU!
schedule May 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed this chap so much. You know Sasuke is gonna turn 6 shades of red when he realizes what everyone else knows except him. Any way rate, he has it coming. Now he can live th rest of his life knowing that the boy he's been taunting AND trying to hook up with also gave him the tattoo he know has lol. Great update.
schedule May 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I hate you and love you ..this has made me so happy...I am a Naur/sasu all the way but i may change my POV its almost painful...I may have to go for both....your so good update soon
person llyoung
schedule May 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love your story. Look forward to reading more.