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April 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Aside from a few typos/errors, good chapter~! (Example: first sentence reads "Naruto talk Gaara," stuff like that.)
Hmm, so my assumptions were wrong, eh? Well then I'll just have to look forward to future updates to find out what really happened then. Keep up the good work!
Hmm, so my assumptions were wrong, eh? Well then I'll just have to look forward to future updates to find out what really happened then. Keep up the good work!
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March 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I´m soooo glad you liked the pic :) (I was worried that you didnt picture Naruto that way, cause I changed him slightly) but now I´m glad :)
I hope naruto and sasuke will get together soon..but not too soon, sasuke can fight over naruto a little while^^
bye the way, is itachi together with sasori?
Ja ne1
I hope naruto and sasuke will get together soon..but not too soon, sasuke can fight over naruto a little while^^
bye the way, is itachi together with sasori?
Ja ne1
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March 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i hope you plan to explain Hope to us couse im kinda confused right now but guessing something happend in the past bewteen Naruto and Sasuke
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March 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Naruto's all like: "WTF Sasuke? 180 much?"
Sasuke's total rejection of his friend was probably the catalyst for Naruto's decent into a world of violence and gangs and now he's just trying to take it back out of the blue. Thats a hell of a thing. Even if Naruto still harbors all those early feelings buried somewhere deep down, its going to take a lot of work from Sasuke to make them into something trustworthy and legitimate. Something like this won't come easy.
Sasuke's total rejection of his friend was probably the catalyst for Naruto's decent into a world of violence and gangs and now he's just trying to take it back out of the blue. Thats a hell of a thing. Even if Naruto still harbors all those early feelings buried somewhere deep down, its going to take a lot of work from Sasuke to make them into something trustworthy and legitimate. Something like this won't come easy.
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March 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I´m so totally in love with your story! and I love how you potrayed Naruto...I think I´m going to draw him:)
oh, and please update soon!
Ja ne!
oh, and please update soon!
Ja ne!
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March 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Here is a little something for you. I hope you like it :)
http://bumblebee435.deviantart.com/art/quot-Home-Sweet-Home-quot-Naruto-158237685
http://bumblebee435.deviantart.com/art/quot-Home-Sweet-Home-quot-Naruto-158237685
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March 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Nice cover up for the lack of fight scene. Real smooth. lol ^^
Although, it really does work out best this way. The story isn't really about Naruto's fighting ability so leaving it just implied lets the reader imagine whatever crazy scenario they want.
Keep up the good work!
Although, it really does work out best this way. The story isn't really about Naruto's fighting ability so leaving it just implied lets the reader imagine whatever crazy scenario they want.
Keep up the good work!
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March 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Continue please!! :D. It's great! NaruGaara = looove ;). It's a bit confusing sometimes, about who is speaking. And, is Sai cousin to Itachi and Sasuke? Who would be the enemy-gang? Hmm ...
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March 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
more please i am addicted to this fanfiction like an addict on cocoaine
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March 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I wanna know more about Sasuke and Naruto's history before he left. Gaara seems to know whats what. I want to too. lol :)
Keep up the good work.
Keep up the good work.