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May 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
L O V E D IT !
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May 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I liked the story very much! It was very cute. ^^ I do hope that you write some more het, because the het section is in dire need of more decent writers. I also hope that you consider writing some more NejiIno, because it is a very cute pairing the way you set them up here (it would be sad if it was left at that XD, I wanna see Ino win him over).
You might want to have a beta comb this over, there were about 10 spelling errors that I found as I was going through. Your descriptions and the story was excellent though, so all you need is a proofer and you'll be set.
You might want to have a beta comb this over, there were about 10 spelling errors that I found as I was going through. Your descriptions and the story was excellent though, so all you need is a proofer and you'll be set.