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by MsTrick

person kati
schedule June 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
cool stuff, the tension that you've created is tangible!
schedule June 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story!! I really loved the lime between Naruto and Sasuke!! So well written and hot!! :)
person hisoka
schedule June 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
never woulda thought hinata the one youd think shed be happy after 3 years away from naruto. has sasuke figured out his feelings yet i hope he does soon before someone tries to take him away from his husband.
updates?
schedule May 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it, a lot. You lend credence and believability to some odd-ball pairings, and make them seriously work. Good show, and I look forward to an update. Of course, nothing's wrong with your writing either. Wonderfully descriptive, written in the tone where text can be glanced over and it's deeper meanings gleaned, this fic leaves nothing to be desired, except more.

~LZ
person animekid
schedule May 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is awesome; best story so far next to diplomatic relations

I mean it has comedy, it has GOOD random pairings, (common sasunaru and gaalee, but also GASP temarixsakura and kibahina in the SAME FIC?!?! And ShikaIno? O_O;;;;; oh and OC that are NOT MARY SUES?! It's a mircle! :O )

but still...loving it so far; cannot wail til I see shippuden gang; ohohohoohohoho gaara isn't kazekage eh? So that means...DIFFERENT OUTFITS!....man I gotta stop yelling, but I really love this fic ^_^

please finish this! something tells me that sasuke is SO jounin/teacher/anbu
schedule May 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg! this is really really good. i love watching the changes in the relationships as they occur and the problems *temari's cheating* that will cause some of these changes. looking foward to your next update.
schedule May 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for updating so soon. I love how you write about all the couples. I also love how your developmenting the realtionship between Sasuke and Naruto. Can't wait until the next chapter. Take care and god bless.
schedule May 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A very fitting lemon between Sasuke and Naruto. You have me hook. Can't wait to read what happen the morning after? Will Sai make an appearance? Great chapter. Take care and god bless.
schedule May 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story!!! I wonder who the spy is? Unless it's Kabuto disguised as an old man?
schedule May 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a good story idea. I can't wait to see how things will go.