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for Three Of a Kind

by mischiefmaker

schedule August 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
AAAWESOME!

Well done! I often find that people aren't... very GOOD at writing threesomes. You are, though!

Another gold star.

-CR
person Labbess
schedule July 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I thought NaruInoSasu was my favorite, but damn, you may have just changed my mind. I loved these three together XD Poor Kiba.
schedule December 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh my gods i have done it public areas but i have Never left anything behind lol then again she was a bit distracted i think loved it and may look at some of your other stuff just to see if you have anything just as funny
person Casey
schedule October 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Awesome writing!
schedule February 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Cute! It's kind of old fashioned and sweet... a sandwich with Ino filling... you need to follow up with a Kiba sandwich!
person oztan
schedule January 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is good. Please write more with them three. Keep going.
person Justin
schedule November 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice. That is all. xD
schedule July 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A sequel with Naruto's idea would be awesome. lol
schedule May 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh no hell no was that done. i needed more. she only sucked naruto dick what about him.

oh well it was good
person Anise
schedule May 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was an absolutely delicious piece of smut! I know you say that it's complete but I definitely think you should consider writing these three again, they make a really fun threesome. Naruto's filthy mouth was great (as well as Kiba's) and I loved his parting shot about Kiba being middle, I wonder if they really could get him to?! This was such a fun read and really well done-I loved it! :)