rate_review Reviews

THIS IS AN INTERESTING STORY. I CAN"T WAIT TO SEE WHAT ALL THE GAMES ITACHI HAS IN MIND ARE.

omg, that was awesome, and hot, very hot. i may have a certain bias though, because i have a soft spot in my heart for the ita/sasu/naru triangle, and any combination of the three gets me rather excited in the first place. then there was use of nushi, probably one of my favorite words in the japanese language at the moment, i like the idea of owner, master, lover, and god being aspects of the same, theres something poetic about it. add in D/s and metions of an ita/sasu/naru in the future and im hooked totally. there were some spelling mistakes, or rather words confusions in it, but thats not important in the end, because those are things that can be totally fixed at a later date. the story has a great premise and direction, and it flowed well, which are the important parts, and your voice is rather enrapturing. things were a little bit fast in some parts, but that was mostly in the sexual encounters which can be hard to write really, so that is also not something to be hung up on. also, i believe the ritual of sharing sake is a little more literal, at least in this close of a situation, and the disciple would drink from the oyabun's cup directly, cementing their bond as family. i know this can be a squicky concept for some people, but i always found the near incestuous quality of that relationship to be a a naughty sort of good.

anyways, im going on much too long, so i will shut myself up now, may your muses be kind, and may you find the time to update soon, because im stuck on this, and i really want to see what diabolical plans itachi has for his poor little naru-chan ^.^ *fic love*

=^-^= that was soooooooooooo very hot!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I can't wait for the next up-date!!!
luck!

>,< damn! that all thats floating through my head right now.....your my new fav itachi/naruto aurthor! I love your bondage fics! to very smexy and graphic! much love! can't wait to read more!.

Ja ne!