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by Adi

schedule February 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aah! Cliff hanger!!! Lol loved this chapter! I can imagine sexy Sasuke leaning over sexy Naruto, helping him with the computer! Macs do suck!! XD Thanks for the update!! No matter how long it takes I'll be eagerly anticipating the next chapter!! Love this story! You rock!!!

^_^ Cianis DeRolionus
person ringpop
schedule February 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Damnit! I knew it! I knew i'd be waiting for the next update & there'd be a hardcore cliffhanger @ the end!!! DANG!!!

Oh well this chapter was cute! Especially the part after Gaara's birthday party & Sasuke was lying on the couch!!

"Naruto?"

"Yeah?"

"Shut up."

HAHAHAHAH SOO CUUTTEEE!!!!

i like this story because not many stories give us the privilage of being in Sasuke's mind. It's always Naruto. But here it's aallll about Sasu!!

Heheh thanks for the update!!!♥!!
person Gwyllion
schedule February 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hot dang! Just when it got to the good part Adi! NoooOOooOOoooooo! A half naked Naruto washing clothes must've been the last straw to Sasuke mm? Gods...I missed this ficcie. *tackles* Reading the part where Naruto trying to turn on his Mac was hilarious. Since I own one myself, I can see why. Though they say that Macs are waaaay more user friendly than PCs. But, to each their own. ;) I also LOLed at the 'Dagger' thing that was mentioned...hahahah! Gods...Naruto's too cute to be true. And I can def sense some jealousy from Sasuke. His perspective on Gaara's so amusing. Can't wait till the smut happens! Yay for ADI! :D

*points* Hahah...Sasuke doesn't know how to wash his clothes..! XDXDXD
person gaara89
schedule February 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh pretty please!! Update soon! That cliffy was just evil! EVIL I SAY!
person charmpit
schedule February 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG I can't believe you stopped it here after making us all wait so long to read about them finally getting it on!!!!!
person ilikecrisps87
schedule February 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hooray! I was so pleased when I saw Conquest had been updated & this chapter was great. Thanks & keep up the good work! :)
person narutoandsasuke
schedule February 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg U LEFT ON A CLIFFHANGER U B****!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE!!!!! LOL
schedule February 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awesome chapter. Can't wait for more.
=)
schedule February 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG,OMG, OMG!!!

I LOVE YOU ADI!!!!

*btw, I totally blame you for my new addiction to capslock!*

Fave lines EVER:

"...it really was for the betterment of both parties that Sasuke-whore only woke up after caffeine."

"Of course there was the occasional leg spasm and the moaning of ‘Dagger no!’ which Sasuke didn’t know quite what to make of and thought it best not to ask."

"...and that was Sasuke’s first meeting of the anti-Gai." (oh god, i don't know why this was so ridiculously funny, but I cried, literally, from laughing so hard when I read it!)

"It felt like his cock was a yo yo, retreating and then returning at the sight of what it felt was it’s soul mate." (lolol!)

"...and Sasuke-whore momentarily sat in the driver’s seat."

Lolol, I feel like I just quoted half your chapter back at you, but OMG, it was soo much win! Lovely, amazingly funny, EPIC win!!!

Love love love!!!!

Muah!!!

person nawatia
schedule February 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
"...Night...." GAH!!!!! Thats it?...Night...ARGH!!!!

OK, now that I have that out of my system - great story so far - I am looking forward to chapter 11!