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by Adi

schedule January 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! Took me two days to read all of it because I have a short attention span but I actually read it!! I can't believe how much I love this story! *giggles* While reading it I kept copying and pasting parts of it and showing it to my friends and laughing for a long time until they told me to shut up XDD

I actually started reading this cause I clicked on your profile and I saw the link to the fanart and that got me interested enough to start reading.

Oh man I totally look forward to the update!! Do you send update notices through email? If you do I'd like to be on that list, if not thats cool ^__^ Ita4Kyu@hotmail.com is my email address if you do.

Thanks so much for this story!
person Dysia
schedule January 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this! I love your story-line/plot! I LOVE GAARA. He's amazing in this story. I love how you use him to lighten the mood (even if lightening the mood involves murdering intent, wait, does that make any sense?) haha. I love how he seems like a dog who escaped his leash when he's hyped up on his happy pills. I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE!
person k_citrus
schedule January 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
really like this !!! ^.^ can't wait for more. I bet Sasuke wanted to kiss Naruto soooooo badly near the refrigerator lolz

and the way you talk about the students life is so realistic... well at least for me because i'm not a student yet :]

good luck!
schedule December 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah! Naruto you chicken! *shakes fist* Dammit. Silly, insecure boys...
person Chrysler
schedule December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Grrrrrr.........NARUTO!

I guess it was TOO easy but still....now Naruto is pushing him away? *sigh* Well the going away party was hilarious, the twister and then Kakashi pulling out the Gai threat. Fun! And then Neji coming to castrate Kiba was priceless not too mention that Naruto and him kept babbling and the porn scene...wow. But Sasuke apologized, he's easing up and I love it. Now, they live together. YAY! Yay until he sees Gaara. Ha! But it's gonna be fun, I can tell. Ooooh and please more Neji, I LOBE him!
person Zrina
schedule December 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
See what happens when I disappear off the net? You WRITE!! Maybe I should vanish more often? Nah... couldn't get my Adi fix then.

Loved the chapter, hon. OMG, Naruto was hilarious with his house cleaning trip!! Poor kid. That was probably the cleanest his place has ever been. I felt soooooo sorry for Sasuke when he was trying to leave Kakashi's place. And I can just picture (although I wish I couldn't) Kakashi doing that to Gai and Lee during twister. *Shudders*

Kiba is an idiot. That's all I have to say about him. That and I hope he realizes that he can't move back in with Naruto now!!

And of course, the hottest part... the sexual tension between Sasuke and Naruto. I like that Naruto didn't give in and the mindless rutting began. He is showing restraint and a little bit of forethought into making Sasuke be the one to make the first move. After all, it is hard to cry foul play if you were the one to start the game.

Can't wait to see how things develop, dear!! XD *hugs and nuzzles*
schedule December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*Hump*



....yeah, I had to do that. I like this. Bet Sasuke is feeling the ass bite that came back eh? Bet he wishes he wasnt such a jerkwad. hehe. I hope he regrets turning Naruto down after that near kiss....and of course, I wonder what he was thinking that whole time.

....and Neji/Kiba...cute
person Mewa
schedule December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay!! You updated! :D Aww poor thing. You have the flu D: but nice update! I liked it!
person Anaheyla
schedule December 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent work as always. Please continue, I love this story!
schedule December 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I spent a good deal of my Sunday night reading this fanfic... and I have to say, I seriously envy your talent with one-liners. Awesome fic. So, which works better to get you to update: compliments or death threats?