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by Adi

person SaphiraIce
schedule December 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hooray for an update! Things are moving now, with them moving in together. Update again soon and get better quickly!
person Kayo
schedule December 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YOSH! I am so estatic that you updated! I have been waiting forever! (And I hope you feel better soon; I'm sick too and I know it sucks) And I am happy that they are living together, all the scenarios that could ensue! But was Sasuke really thinking about kissing him at the end? Lol, anyways, the whole Kiba-Neji-Hinata thing is always so comedic; I believe that bit was my favorite part of the whole chapter. And the way Naruto got rid of Neji? Priceless! (I never would have thought of it) So, magnificent work (as always) and please update as soon as possible! This is my favorite Naruto story right now that's still in progress. The waiting is torture! (But it makes the chapter oh so sweet.)
person charmpit
schedule December 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
tch. I'll hump you.

As soon as Naruto gets to humping Sasuke.

How many more chapters must we all wait?
person hina88
schedule December 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well allow me to review ^_^

Since this update was for me… *molests*

Thank you honey!!! *wraps herself around adi* I love you too and you’re always hot – ksss.

Anyway – okay review this chapter. Let me just say that despite requests for you to have them getting it on, I like the pace. There’s development in this and well that almost kiss was drool worthy! It’s making me all tense and making me want to see them FUCK! But the best thing about it is – that Sasuke leaned in. Yes that’s right. Sasuke Mr I don’t want you blah blah jerk – LEANED IN PEOPLE!!! That’s right and why didn’t Naruto take advantage because damn it he has pride to!!! And also because lol if I were him how would I know that wasn’t just some joke before I got rejected again. SASUKE TEME! There’s only so much rejection a man can take so now you have to seduce Naruto into YOUR bed hehehehe *rubs hands* can’t wait.

Oooh but adi >.< Gai’s balls… ^_^;;; was that really necessary to etch that into our minds :s but I loved how Kakashi was just being a pain! And neji XD heheh I’d love to have seen him scrubbing that toilet… with an apron and nothing else, bent over basically asking for someone to shove something up that hole….

Err… ^_^’’’ got carried away

Anyway thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you!!! >.< *glomps*

hina xXxx
schedule December 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Tons of sympathy for you and Yay for the new chapter. I was hoping that they would move in together and I can't wait to see what happens next. Great work as always.
person Gwyllion
schedule December 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LMAO! What a hilarious chappie! I can SO see Naruto scrambling his way around trying to multi-task. It's HARD! And poor Kiba....Castration is prob the best way to die than to face a Hyuuga... ;) You did a great job in this chap. Hilarious and cute in one package! And the ending!!! O__O Waah! You are cruel. :D Can't wait to read more!
schedule December 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
:D Thank you for another amazing chapter! <3 <3 <3!
schedule December 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Update. And a good one too. Kiba was hysterical. James Bond... those are some big words. Cracks me up. Can't wait for more.
person shai69
schedule December 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's getting very interesting now that the two are living together...hmmm I sense a lemon coming on :D
person Ashrey
schedule December 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
♥ Uwah! Sasu whore! the adorable little bastard showed up again! ♥

Ah this certainly unexpected turn XD I can’t imagine if both of them will be flatmate! It will be disastrous (in a very perverted way XD).

And the scene with Chiyo-baa is really funny, especially when she faked her death and saying that Naruto had an admirer and then run away with the ramen cup XD (and it proofed that Sasuke is more important than ramen in Naruto’s mind X3)

I really love this chapter, it’s really good and nice, their relationship developing in a very nice way~

Keep up with the good work and good luck in Uni!

Ash ♥