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by Adi

person Kayo
schedule November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story was simply amazing. The character development is great, the humor had me laughing all night, and it was simply so well written!!! This is the best fic I have read in several months. So much of it was just great! (And funny) Like Kiba and Naruto on opposite sides of the bathroom door, Sasuke navigator, "The Dagger", Sasuke whore's antics, Kakashi, Gaara (OMG, Gaara's thoughts!!!), and just so much more. But there's a good balance too, between the serious and the not: Itachi and Sasuke and the general Uchiha family relationship, Sasuke staying true to his personality, the whole thing between Naru and Sasu (and how they don't just give in immediately to each other, etc. Overall, it's just so fleshed out, the story is awe-inspiring and striking. Bloody Fantastic! Keep up the excellent work!
person Lila
schedule November 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Alright i'm here to show some love...... Thank you for the wonderful update and i hope the next one is just as good.....XD i love this story it's so cool.....Anyway back to studying for me :)
schedule November 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yyaaayy! an update.. i really liked how you described itachi..hehe. hilarious. anyway, im looking fwd to the next chappie!!! cant wait~
person Timer
schedule November 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I luv this story please update soon!
person Dragon7
schedule November 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story please continue writing it and post againg soon.
schedule November 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh HOLY CRAP Please update this soon! There's so many little things right with this fiction. I don't normally go in for the whole we're-at-school-and-not-really-ninja-at-all-but-I'll-still-do-you-Sasuke-cause-you're-freakin'-hot kind of stories but this one is really really well done! Honestly I'm trying not to laugh when i write this but the first time i saw 'The Dagger' I couldn't stop laughing. Like I actually had to sit back from the computer for a good 7-8 minutes and just wipe the tears of mirth away. Tremendously funny!

I know it's hard to keep up with things like this when you're at uni and so forth (As I've also done the same), and especially if a story doesn't seem to be writing itself as well, but I would immensely appreciate an update! It doesn't have to be ridiculously soon or anything, but please keep going with this, you have an amusing style. I also like the relationship between Kiba and Naruto, really quite neat. The scene after Naruto locked Kiba in the bathroom and Hinata coming to break them up was really amusing. And Gaara is very well done also, most people have some kind of difficulty transferring him into an AU setting but you've done it well. I loved the chapter with him and Akamaru! Hilarious! Please update soon!

Can't wait for Sasuke to move in either! *pumps fist in the air for Naruto* Go get his prissy ass, BOY!
person Kalico
schedule November 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yes, yes...how many times have i read this fic and not reviewed? yo no se. But i think that it is high time, ne? Would you kindly update this fic soon? I am still reading it if no one else is...but i understand the college timing issue. i'm in the same boat and these fics allow me ample time to procrastinate. you will be supporting the cause if you do update. But right now, thanks to there being no more stories to read, i will have to actually do my homework. Anyway, until we meet again madam/sir...
person NaoAngel
schedule November 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG I loved the new chappie!!! I've been waiting for so long waaah, and I totally fangirled all over it. I loved it, I really did. the convo between naru and kiba on the phone cracked me up, but it was nowhere as awesome as seeing sasuke asking kakashi to stay at his place. LOL. poor poor sasuke, i was surely not expecting this and his father is a jerk. and I HATE Itachi, I hope you kill him, I hope he gets a hit by a car or something. rofl. OMG. you mentioned the Dagger which really made me happy haha. WHY IS SO DIFFICULT TO ADMIT THAT THEY WANT EACH OTHER???? LOL. the ending was awesome, even though it was an evil cliffie i still liked it. OMG SASUKE IS GOING TO NARUTO'S PLACE THAT MEANS LOTZ OF LOVE AND COOKIES FOR ME!!!!! meh. anyway, thanks for the update sweetie, it was great and worth the wait.
schedule November 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this story is, like, awesome x10! more please please. sasuke-whore's commentary kills me.

Yes! Lets move in with him, when he’s sleeping we can sneak in and fuck his brains out.

best line ever, seriously.
person LadyWolf
schedule November 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I will show you loads and loads of love **about to throw cookies*** IF you post the next chappie!!!