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November 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lol this is my favorite line in the whole story...
Sasuke-whore seemed to be squeezing the image of the blond, humping it at random intervals and then looking pathetically back at the true owner of Sasuke’s mind. ‘Gimme’ was written all over the little whore’s face.
Altho the cute supermarket scene was hilarious. But that 'Gimme' comment gave me the best visual ever...loved it lol.
Sasuke-whore seemed to be squeezing the image of the blond, humping it at random intervals and then looking pathetically back at the true owner of Sasuke’s mind. ‘Gimme’ was written all over the little whore’s face.
Altho the cute supermarket scene was hilarious. But that 'Gimme' comment gave me the best visual ever...loved it lol.
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November 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay an update! And it was so beautifully done. The explanations on how Sasuke was feeling. The humor, and Sasuke pervert. It always makes my day to read about Naruto and Kiba's relationship. They are definately a funny duo. I love your story. I hope you keep updating. <3
Chishio
Chishio
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November 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
loved the chapter :D it was simply fantastic, and amusing too.
can't wait for the next bit ^-^
can't wait for the next bit ^-^
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November 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A POX ON THE MAN WHO INVENTED CLIFFHANGERS!
Love the story Adi, please keep goin'.
Love the story Adi, please keep goin'.
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November 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
so it's going ok. good writing and everything and really humorous but i won't be reading anymore. is not my kind of thing when fics start of with naru/sasu and because the authors want to draw out tension the romance becomes much too slow and unrealistic. and then there's the little bits of naru/other people, because if u not going to have naru/sasu then u have to put him with somebody right? what i'm saying is these kinds of long romances only work when it's a sideline to an adventure when it's not the main focus. it only becomes tedious and irritating.
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November 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very cool
=)
=)
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November 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I so anticipate fucking in the next 2-3 chapters (possibly next chapter? :::crosses fingers:::) This is currently the story I stalk AFF for. I'm officially a lurker, I think I just might die of shame. As always, wonderfully written. As always, loved Sasuke-whore. Tch, who wouldn't?
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November 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Do you want a little love? Here it is!
Update soooooon please!!! This story is sooooo good and I'm so impatient to know what is going to happen! please, please, please!
sasuke whore was very funny, and the old Chiyo was fantastic! Please don't torture me and update soon, if you can!
(Could it be that I found you even in Y!gallery? I'd swear that the 'Adi' name doesn't sound new to me!)
bye!!! good work, update as soon as possible!
hak. (lisaxxx on Y!g)
Update soooooon please!!! This story is sooooo good and I'm so impatient to know what is going to happen! please, please, please!
sasuke whore was very funny, and the old Chiyo was fantastic! Please don't torture me and update soon, if you can!
(Could it be that I found you even in Y!gallery? I'd swear that the 'Adi' name doesn't sound new to me!)
bye!!! good work, update as soon as possible!
hak. (lisaxxx on Y!g)
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November 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lol.
both are eagered to fnck each other. Hopefully it's naruto's daggers who stands most >:D
both are eagered to fnck each other. Hopefully it's naruto's daggers who stands most >:D
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November 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I worship your supreme authorship. I loved the grocery scene. Naruto is so cute and in character. I loved the Itachi and the spoon thing. Oh hell, I loved it all!