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by Adi

schedule November 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Little love, big love and all the in between love for you and this fic!!!

:D

I loove this story! I'm so glad you got the time to update it. It's fun and quirky and I'm having a mad love affair with Sasuke-whore! By far my favorite. Although I love your Naruto.

Seriously, awesome job. I would write more, but i'm exhausted and I have to be up in four hours to catch a flight. So...LOVE!!!
person hina88
schedule November 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Heh – FI-NA-LY XD well now that I’ve gotten that out of the way I liked the family scene mostly because I thought I was going to be annoyed at Fugaku for tossing Sasuke out but there was something in the words he used and the way he thought about the determination he saw in Sasuke I found myself liking him – I also snickered when Itachi was obviously not pleased with the way Fugaku reacted to Sasuke standing up for himself – and well, the over view of Itachi was honestly? Jerk.

The Kakashi scene was cool XD I love Kaka-sensei!!! *glomps* yeah :d he’s cool – and I loved how he wanted to make Sasuke say it out loud, dragging out the moment and making Sasuke pissed lol heh it was funny oh and Gai-sensei showing up at 5am to make them run LOL – bless!!! I’d be miserable if someone do that to me and then turn homicidal – sleep is sacred lol – or should be anyway.

Supermarket scene Chiyo-baa-sama *sweatdrop* you’re going to feature her a lot now aren’t you? Well I won’t get into to that but I loved that she used her little ‘play dead’ joke against Naruto because they wanted the sameflavoured ramen XD OH! And when Sasuke looked back automatically to see who was watching Naruto I was like ‘duh Uhciha’ but yeah and and and HE SAID HE NEEDED A PLACE TO STAY!!!!!

*struggles to contain excitement* I’m cool I’m cool, it’s just aww ~*glomps naru and sasu and adi* this is great thanks so much for the update and sorry for nagging a lot *sweatdrop* can’t wait to see how supermarket convo continues!

Hina xXxx
person Allys
schedule November 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Adi you Meanie!!! LOL, what kind of place is that to end??? *headdesk* Ahhh!!!!!! You're already working on the new chapter right?? Cause if not, GET ON IT BABE!! This is very important!! Cause, LOL, my smut monster is rampaging *snickers* She and Sasuke-whore could hang out, they'd have a grand old time, inciting riots and getting Sasuke sexed up six ways from Sunday by a certain bodacious blond XD. Hehehe Oh and Sasuke-whore humping imaginary Naruto and begging "Gimme" XD, LOL. There were several choice moments in this chappie and that was one of them. Andother one of them was Naruto fighting with Chiyo for Ramen. When you resort to taking on old ladies dude, you've carried the obsession too far XD. So Naruto though, XD, and I loved his reaction to Chiyo faking her own death (again XD). And the pick up lines *shakes head*. And the dream, and the applause in Sasuke's head, LOL, and there were more, but lol, we'd be here forever. *Huggles u* So happy you updated lovey *Rewards Adi's good deed, with copious amounts of molestation - Chuu*
person Kimra
schedule November 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I be showing you some love. So update ne? And get to the sex. I'm all with Sasuke-whore. I want him to get Naruto too. :P
schedule November 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love your stories and I'm so happy about the update!
person Gwyllion
schedule October 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HOLY WOW! I must comment here and say that this is one of the most fantastics reads in a very long time for me! Wonderful plot, adorable and addicting characters, and everything else that's made with love and squee! I can't wait to read more future installments for you. It's so cute to see Sasuke warring with himself to jump Naruto and I'm extremely glad that naruto is strong enough not to give in and jump Sasuke after that horrible episode when Sasuke blew him off. He deserved it in a way. I hope the jealousy will increase twicefold....cuz you know, it's fun to see a jealous and possessive Uchiha over a specific and adorable blond. ;) Please keep up the great work! Am looking forward for more. *worships*
schedule October 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You don't even have to ask! You know I have absolutely nothing but love for this amazing story. You know that I have a special connection to it, cuz you have me angsting over why hottie TAs and lab techs weren't at my Uni!
It is perfection, or at least damn near close. I love the dynamics of all the realtionships in the story- not just the NaruSasu, but especially the NaruSasu.
Sasuke is being a bastard with a mega-crush on a mega hottie, Naruto's being Naruto and everybody and evrything is melding harmoniously. I am on the edge of my seat reading this, and I know you are going to update fast, because you know I have a ton of things to hold over you head.
Ah! My goddess, I love thee! Here, take a couple bishounen, on me!
Update fast!
person Chrysler
schedule October 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chap 1, 2 and 3

...I can't breathe! I thought you couldn't get any funnier or that after a while, things were gonna die down and I know I'm only on Chap3, butI have a feeling this is gonna be GOOOOODDDD! Once Sasuke got drunk--OMG-- and then Naruto stepped in, I just fell out of my chair. I'm not even kidding, I laughed too much it hurt. Naruto is so well in character as is Sakura in her relationship with him. Not that the others aren't, just they are extremely perfect if not more so because their so pervertic and I feel bad for Kiba, but those beastiality jabs are hilarious. Naruto is such a dork! HEhehehe....And when Gaara wanted to kill someone for Nartuo 0.o........a little weird. lol. But awwwww...Sasuke got away! *pout* all those chances for nothing. He should've molested him in his sleep (Kidding)
person Chrysler
schedule October 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chap 4

Ewww, could do without the forest image. Real man ass my ass. Honestly, why can't Sasuke figure out his kidnapper? Every pissed drunk, the orange SCREAMS naruto and he knows it. I do like the small little things that show they're falling for each other. So cuuuute! And the shower scene.....is there nothing you can't do? That was too hot! Mmmmmm Sasuke. And an ITachi scene---even if minor--still makes me happy, even though he's psychotic and uncaring. Yeah.....The Sakura and Lee conversation was crazy too, lol. I'm feeling for sasuke right now, however. His frustrations are understandable and I can't wait for Naruto to get in the picture (Not in a pervertic sense but I wouldn't mind either way)
person Chrysler
schedule October 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chap 5

Kakashi is very well in character too and extremely loveable and odd with his weird excuses and porn fixation. And in his own way, he's helping the 'kids' out too. It's cute that Naruto's wearing other colors too and the singing defectiveness was humorous. Poor Akamaru. I love Naruto and Kiba's relationship foremost. IT's sooooo funny. Glad their getting under each other's skin now. Naruto at the end was a little depressing, but I'm liking that it's getting serious without loosing the humor.