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June 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
chapter 2: eeewwww! you made sasuke puke on himself...thats disgusting!
i love your psychotic Gaara; “I will kill them for you”. LOL. I wish i had murderous mates like that? maybe?
on to ch 3....
i love your psychotic Gaara; “I will kill them for you”. LOL. I wish i had murderous mates like that? maybe?
on to ch 3....
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May 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. The ending was perfect. :D Scratch that, the whole story is amazing. Loooved it!
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May 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww that was really sweet, adn it feels a lot more complete now. You still have the ability to make me roll with freaking laughter. That's one of the things I love most about your stories. Your very first fan fic and longest multi-chapter is complete! Congratulations! (again) *throws confetti* You did good babe *MUAH* ♥
p.s. Good luck in your exams.
p.s. Good luck in your exams.
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May 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
“Fuck, make-up sex is good, man, I need a cigarette.”
“You don’t smoke.”
“I could if I wanted to!”
Lol, Naruto.
I'm so very happy you wrote this. It makes a very good conclusion seeing how they progressed from now till a year later. Their relationship is so unconventional but somehow that's what it makes it all the more interesting.
Naruto was so great in this. Going to sleep in the lab so he could be near Sasuke, and trying to charm Sasuke parents. *sigh* Gotta love that blondie.
Again, thank you, thank you, thank you. *thinks what else she can get out of Adi by winning checkers* XD
“You don’t smoke.”
“I could if I wanted to!”
Lol, Naruto.
I'm so very happy you wrote this. It makes a very good conclusion seeing how they progressed from now till a year later. Their relationship is so unconventional but somehow that's what it makes it all the more interesting.
Naruto was so great in this. Going to sleep in the lab so he could be near Sasuke, and trying to charm Sasuke parents. *sigh* Gotta love that blondie.
Again, thank you, thank you, thank you. *thinks what else she can get out of Adi by winning checkers* XD
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May 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow... it all comes down to the home-stretch! Naruto banter 'Ramen-time', 'The Daggar' comments throughout the fic; Sasuke's banter and his obessession with coffee; Kiba's banter... 'nestled up your ass'
Kami, I loved it ALL! Keep writing and completing fics and all keep reading!
PS: 'nestled up your ass' I really loved this one!
Kami, I loved it ALL! Keep writing and completing fics and all keep reading!
PS: 'nestled up your ass' I really loved this one!
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May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ZOMG...that ENDING XDDDDDDDDDDD....good job konohamaru...lolz...I loved every bit of this btw...*amaaaaaazing* -sing song voice- The dynamics between Sasuke and Naruto were very amusing to read and you did an awesome job kudos!
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May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay so now when the epilogue came out I was thinking that I should read the whoole story all over again. *grin* I even think I said that when the "last" chapter came out. *scratch back of neck*
Sadly I'm really bad at this reviewing stuff but since I really like your story I'm gonne at least try. Hehe.
*thinking* You know when Sakura is all like 'Sasuke is not gay. Geti it?' on Naruto in chapter one? That's what my sister keeps telling me about him. *sweatdrop* She just doesn't believe in SasuNaru. *shakes head*
Hehehe I love how 'the love of the Dagger' is "spreading" through Naruto's body. *snicker* Talk about denial! But a very... special kind of denial (after all, he does admit that his dick is in love *shakes head*). It's funny that they're both so horny and both want the other through th whole story but you don't even let them go at it at the end. *laugh* (that's NOT a bad thing, I think it was great that you left the whole seme/uke-thing open) I just really REALLY liked that BOTH of them was always thinking that they would be the one to top. *laughs*
And I think everyone who have ever read this story will forever like Sasuke-whore. *snicker* It just wouldn't be the same without him. He and the Dagger maybe should team up more?
Both Sasuke and Naruto are so damn stubborn through th whole story. And in denial, of course. But that feels more in character for them doesn't it? Hehe.
Naruto's relationship with Gaara is so hilarious. Actually, Gaara is hilarious overall but when the two of them interact I just can't stop laughing. I mean, Gaara really likes Naruto. He's a good friend and everything. And somehow Naruto can sense that and sees Gaara as his friend as well, even if Gaara is really bad a espressing himself. But he's really trying! With the "I will kill them for you" and everything. That's what makes it so great! That shows that he really cares for Naruto, but it's just so funny!
Ok, sometimes he doesn't feel all THAT friendly with Naruto (like when he shows up at the doorstep at 3am). But he still puts up with it! (Ok, so it's all because of his therapist and all that but I still have so much fun over their relationship).
"If this Sasuke couldn’t love Naruto, then there was something wrong with him, and he did not deserve to live." Gaara's a true friend! *water-eyed chibi* And of course the scene where Gaara is high on meds and has missed Naruto so much is absolutely great!
The part in chapter 4 when Naruto and Kakashi is having their little meeting. Kakashi's logic for taking up his book is so great. Hehehe. Green's a camouflage colour, all right? Hahaha.
"Although this was all very interesting, Kakashi saw the opportunity to continue reading, after all it would do Sasuke some good to have some social interaction."
I can really see him think like that. *sweatdrop* *laugh* I also find it incredibly funny every time he refers to Sasuke as "his cute little student" or "cute litte TA". *smile*
I having a lot of fun about the way you put in Akamaru, like when Naruto is pacing in the beginning of chapter 5.
"He had tried to explain to Akamaru that this pacing thing needed to be done alone, but apparently Akamaru had problems of his own, so Naruto let it slide."
My dog has actually given up on trailing after me when I am pacing. Hehe.
It's also very amusing every time the dog "change sides".
You know what? I think the 'day 5' in chapter 11 is my totally favourite part of this story. That whole day is just so incredibly funny, and somehow it feels like that day is a turn-point for the boys relationship. (and it can't go wrong when you let Naruto, Sasuke and Gaara all go bowling together *snicker*).
I liked your epilogue. It wasn't that "sweet" little ending. It was normal and realistic. They had problems. Of course they had! It's Sasuke and Naruto, they will always have some problems with each other. But I liked how you worked it out. The meeting between Naruto and Sasuke's family was all great.
And of course the ending was absolutely great.
Thankyou so much for a great story. I really enjoyed it, every part of it.
Sadly I'm really bad at this reviewing stuff but since I really like your story I'm gonne at least try. Hehe.
*thinking* You know when Sakura is all like 'Sasuke is not gay. Geti it?' on Naruto in chapter one? That's what my sister keeps telling me about him. *sweatdrop* She just doesn't believe in SasuNaru. *shakes head*
Hehehe I love how 'the love of the Dagger' is "spreading" through Naruto's body. *snicker* Talk about denial! But a very... special kind of denial (after all, he does admit that his dick is in love *shakes head*). It's funny that they're both so horny and both want the other through th whole story but you don't even let them go at it at the end. *laugh* (that's NOT a bad thing, I think it was great that you left the whole seme/uke-thing open) I just really REALLY liked that BOTH of them was always thinking that they would be the one to top. *laughs*
And I think everyone who have ever read this story will forever like Sasuke-whore. *snicker* It just wouldn't be the same without him. He and the Dagger maybe should team up more?
Both Sasuke and Naruto are so damn stubborn through th whole story. And in denial, of course. But that feels more in character for them doesn't it? Hehe.
Naruto's relationship with Gaara is so hilarious. Actually, Gaara is hilarious overall but when the two of them interact I just can't stop laughing. I mean, Gaara really likes Naruto. He's a good friend and everything. And somehow Naruto can sense that and sees Gaara as his friend as well, even if Gaara is really bad a espressing himself. But he's really trying! With the "I will kill them for you" and everything. That's what makes it so great! That shows that he really cares for Naruto, but it's just so funny!
Ok, sometimes he doesn't feel all THAT friendly with Naruto (like when he shows up at the doorstep at 3am). But he still puts up with it! (Ok, so it's all because of his therapist and all that but I still have so much fun over their relationship).
"If this Sasuke couldn’t love Naruto, then there was something wrong with him, and he did not deserve to live." Gaara's a true friend! *water-eyed chibi* And of course the scene where Gaara is high on meds and has missed Naruto so much is absolutely great!
The part in chapter 4 when Naruto and Kakashi is having their little meeting. Kakashi's logic for taking up his book is so great. Hehehe. Green's a camouflage colour, all right? Hahaha.
"Although this was all very interesting, Kakashi saw the opportunity to continue reading, after all it would do Sasuke some good to have some social interaction."
I can really see him think like that. *sweatdrop* *laugh* I also find it incredibly funny every time he refers to Sasuke as "his cute little student" or "cute litte TA". *smile*
I having a lot of fun about the way you put in Akamaru, like when Naruto is pacing in the beginning of chapter 5.
"He had tried to explain to Akamaru that this pacing thing needed to be done alone, but apparently Akamaru had problems of his own, so Naruto let it slide."
My dog has actually given up on trailing after me when I am pacing. Hehe.
It's also very amusing every time the dog "change sides".
You know what? I think the 'day 5' in chapter 11 is my totally favourite part of this story. That whole day is just so incredibly funny, and somehow it feels like that day is a turn-point for the boys relationship. (and it can't go wrong when you let Naruto, Sasuke and Gaara all go bowling together *snicker*).
I liked your epilogue. It wasn't that "sweet" little ending. It was normal and realistic. They had problems. Of course they had! It's Sasuke and Naruto, they will always have some problems with each other. But I liked how you worked it out. The meeting between Naruto and Sasuke's family was all great.
And of course the ending was absolutely great.
Thankyou so much for a great story. I really enjoyed it, every part of it.
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May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What a wonderful expose. I really enjoyed everything, especially dinner with the folks! Also, last chapter, when you were talking about "Look, shiny," as a distraction tactic for Kiba, I almost peed myself. Thanks for a great fic, love. It's been a bright spot in my day.
~AA666
~AA666
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May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
“What is it Konoha-”
“Wanna fuck?”
Silence.
“Get. Out.”
I love this part.
Well. Actually. I love the whole thing. Like. From the first to the last chapter.
You're MASTER OF FANFICTION! *dies happily*
“Wanna fuck?”
Silence.
“Get. Out.”
I love this part.
Well. Actually. I love the whole thing. Like. From the first to the last chapter.
You're MASTER OF FANFICTION! *dies happily*
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May 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
aww, a perfect ending..
and cricket? lol. i love you for that.
and cricket? lol. i love you for that.