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by Adi

person Chrysler
schedule October 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chap 6

Willing to share his ramen...psh!Gaara is really fanatastic at this interacting thing, he just covers ALLL the bases, doesn't he? Loved the conversation. and the date wasn't so bad but that ending *cry* what did I really expect???
schedule October 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
heyyy.. ive read this chapter before!!! *whines* i thought you had updated... anyway, im still waiting for a new chapter..:D
schedule October 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Naruto raised an eyebrow (okay he raised both of them, but he was trying!) at the dreamy look that crossed Sakura’s face. She was probably having dominatrix fantasies about what she could do to Sasuke. Naruto wasn’t worried, Sakura’s previous boyfriend, Neji, had turned out to be gay (Naruto liked to think Sakura turned Neji gay) she just had a knack for picking out the sexually unavailable ones.

That paragraph is making me cry laughing. I can't stop.
schedule October 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god. "Sasuke was not the type to give into his sexual desires, some might call him anally repressed, he liked to think he was reserved, and a little aloof." You're killing me here. I haven't laughed this hard in a while. Your wit is genius.
schedule October 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God your Gaara is sooooo funny, too. I'm addicted. This is so fucking great!
person Miranda
schedule October 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*sobs* Nooo~ it ended!!!~

Thank-you for writing! I LOVE this fic, please update as soon as possible!

haha, and I love how Sasuke has the Sasuke-whore and the Sasuke-ice prince in his head (especially the Sasuke-whore), OMG, hilarious.
person Miranda
schedule October 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
woah, after reading other people's comments I feel like mine was so pathetically short *tries to hide it* Omg, I've been reading your fic all day though, I'm totally hooked! I'm SO glad I found your fic, it's completely amazing.

PLE~~~ASE!!~ I WILL GLADLY SERVE AS YOUR LIFE-LONG PERSONAL RAMEN CHEF IF YOU WOULD JUST PLEASE UPDATE SOON~~~!!!
person Dicey
schedule September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was a fantastic start! Haha Naruto articulate as always! Witty from the start this is gonna be a fabulous fic so OF COURSE you should keep writing!!! More while you're at it! Do hope there are hot lemons in there somewhere but otherwise and overall fun hard to get fic is just as good! More!
person Dicey
schedule September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Am very very sorry would've totally done the review every chapter thing except the stupid website says I can only review once a day (the heck?) and I honestly couldn't stop reading! So I'll do my best to make this as long as possible. Ya know to show my gratitude and the like.

OMFG. ROTFLMAO! Goddam this is so bloody hilarious! I totally love your writing style and I'm seriously thanking whatever deities are out there that this isn't that oneshot PWP you originally planned. Cuz this is totally way way way better then that. Although if you still feel the need to write that by all means please do!! XDXDXD

I love Naruto!! He's so gorgeous! And I mean that in a cute adorable bubbly fucking hilarious personality he has. Cough. Dagger indeed. Every time he mentions it I totally crack up. This fic is seriously in the whole piss yourself laughing category. But it's not only funny it's fairly believeable for an AU and college fic at that.

Kakashi haha what a lazy arse! Sasuke is uptight but oh so sweet and seriously he needs to get laid. I LOVE whore sasuke and student sasuke fighting it out. Whore sasuke oughta takeover more!

Kiba and Hinata! Those two are so so cute together! I really love the friendship bt/w Kiba and Naruto and Akamaru is just crack up. I love how he and Naruto console each other. The howling thing was great too.

Sand siblings little as though they appear are great! Gaara as emo. Yep. Mos def. Haha but I do like how he's homocidal but still normal enough to get along with.

Poor Naruto's attempts at dating! OMG that peniuses meal had me totally cracking up. Jesus. Although if it was a chinese restaurant no ramen would be strange. Ramen is originally a chinese invention. Sasuke and the whole 'must eat. eat now' but actual quasi date... hehe CUTE!

This latest bombshell though... Man I'm gonna miss Kiba Naruto together! haha Kiba butt!!! But well if it's progress towards the greater good. And by that I mean Sasunaru smexing then all for it I suppose!!

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! I OFFER MY FIRSTBORN!! THIS FIC FUCKING ROCKS!
schedule September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhh... what?? The end? Like the END end or I'm done for the night but not forever end? Awesome story. Yeah, still confused by that word in... feel kinda fuzzy, confused... wait, I already said that.