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by Adi

person pheobePINK
schedule September 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nice!
person Aidiya
schedule September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hey i just noticed something sasuke hasnt given naruto his shirt back yet. or has he and i missed it somewhere? aww wouldnt it be cute if he still smelt it every now and then :) im so happy for kiba too, but sad at the same time poor naruto's world is crashing down on him. ooo i was wondering if you were gonna have it so that gaara moved in with naruto as part of his therapy aahahaha poor gaara and poor naruto too going from kiba to gaara would be hard to get used too. hah! could you imagine the glare-downs gaara and sasuke would have if he ever tried to return the shirt and gaara met him at the door! haha anyway good job on the fic looking forward to reading more!
person Kerrisa
schedule September 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay for updates!! *dances* I missed this fic! =O But i'm glad you're getting pumped about writing it again =D I 'luuuurve' it lots! Sasuke's confused emotions/reactions and just all of Naruto keeps me wantin to read morez ^___^ But now Kiba is leaving =( Poor Naruto.. that "oh..." didn't sound enthusiastic in the least so imma concerned for him <_> Update soon, yeah? I must know what will happen next!! D= !! Lol <3 U
person Ashrey
schedule September 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*Is in shock after reading the last part*

How... How could you Kiba?! You're evil!

But that's ok Naruto, you can either:
1. Moved out from there to and move in into my house (I'll gladly welcome you dear!)
2. You can stay there and I will move in with you

And I can happily watch when you and Sasuke were having sex our simply make out in the house X3

schedule September 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Um, make sasuke and naruto have sex fast or something with sasuke otherwise this fanfic is going down. you know im right. You'll loooose readers.
person Shaka
schedule September 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this fic, because of its humour, plot and most importantly whore!Sasuke
Hope you'll update soon
schedule August 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ouch--super ouch. :O

I hope you do update soon~

(This is my first time reviewing on this site. I finally understand how to work it! xD)
person Serrandipity
schedule August 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
O.O NUU! >.< Poor Naru.. He's so dependant on other people, I wonder how he'll handle living on his own. >.> Though, in the manga, he does live by himself (I'm pretty sure), ne? So I suppose it won't be THAT bad. Oh yes, grats to the Hinata and Kiba~ :3 Now they can, as Naruto puts it, make tons of babies, ne? XD Thanks a ton for the update, needed something to keep me going, and loved the chapter~ Update soon and keep up the superb work! X3
person Zrina
schedule August 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You know I loved this latest chapter! Sasuke!whore just needs to work on Sasuke's subconscious a little more and then we will have hot Naru/Sasu smexing!!! After all, know matter how much Sasuke may fantasize, we KNOW he isn't going to be on top!! I love the humor and I love how you give things time to stew before moving on. Real life is like that and you have a way of portraying that in your stories. People do not resolve their issues after a few days of brooding. Hopefully Naruto will get over the pain and humiliation of the rejection and resume his "Never Give Up!" attitude!

*lurves on you*
person blueh
schedule August 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
O.O Naruto's gonna be all alone? :( And Sasuke's so mean and indecisive. He wants Naruto badly yet he's denying it. Poor Naruto... Hope Sasuke will make it up to him soon.