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for Conquest

by Adi

person noface
schedule June 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*Glomps the hints of uchihacest* When is Sasuke going to accept defeat? This story is at the top of my list of fave fanfics right now! Keep it going!
schedule June 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!!!!!!! I SEE THE UCHIHACEST! It was nicely executed with the way Itachi liked watching Sasuke eat meat. yum yum. that's sooooooooo sexy.

nice chapter. I can't wait for some Naru/Sasu.
person Zrina
schedule June 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
poor Naruto... avoidance is NOT the best remedy for his problem, lol!! hmmm, but now he has Neji alone in the apartment!
person NexusW
schedule June 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like how your developing this story. I have a couple stories now that I advidly read and yours just so happens to be one of them.

That means you've reached the level of helping me procrastinate with SasuNaru goodness.

Good job!

In other news I like how its not straight to the point of Naruto likes Sasuke, Sasuke likes him back, the screw like rabbits on the teachers desk. I like a good solid wait.

Thank you, for a very nice piece of fiction.

Nexus
person animehead
schedule June 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!! You updated and I LOVED it. You're awesome. This story is awesome. Everything is awesome. *is done being weird*

I do so love this hilarious story and I do so love the Itachi/Sasuke moments. I love when Sasuke is all uncomfortable and stuff. Neji is hot. Sakura needs a restraining order or some abuse management classes. (abuse mangement lol) Poor Sasuke though. All sexually frustrated and has to jerk off at night with his sadistic, perv, brother listening in. (i love it) I can't wait for you to write more. This story makes me want to update mine... probably won't happen, but at least it makes me want to!
person Hestia
schedule June 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh god!! I love this! So awesome!!! And I've only read the prologue!
person Hestia
schedule June 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Review of Chapter 1
I love Naruto not being willing to give up orange! And his idea that Sakura turned Neji gay--hysterical! And Sasuke with glasses--oh so cute! It's so weird--I just finished a chapter of my current story, and I had almost put a passage about Naruto making Sasuke wear glasses to the library. I decided to leave it out, deciding not a lot of people find glasses sexy like I do. Squeal!!! Sasuke in glasses!!!

person Hestia
schedule June 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Review of Chapter Two

AWESOME!!

1) Naruto humping Akamaru--got to be a fanfiction classic
2) the dream--so fucking hot!
3) Kiba getting shy over Hinata/panicking at the bar/calling his cock the stake
4) Gaara!!! Emo Gaara!!! (and hives!!!)
5) Kakashi, the evil professor abusing his TAs (Damn, why can't I have a TA like Sasuke--oh, yeah, cause I'd get fired and cause my college doesn't have graduate students)
6) Horny Sasuke hot for muscled Naruto . . . Horny Sasuke mad at the world . . . Horny Sasuke swilling vodka!!!

Damn, I haven't been this excited about a fanfiction in a long time!
person Hestia
schedule June 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Review of Chapter 3-5
Well, thank god, I waited to start reading this until after the semester because this is just torture--I want some Naruto and Sasuke interaction, at least a conversation! But I love messed up Sasuke! And Kakashi--the bastard! Ah--enter Itachi!
Kiba ass--suggesting waxing--LOL!

It does suck having to get through finals week when all you want to do is write, doesn't it?
person Hestia
schedule June 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh Naruto--you're good! You're so good! A Date!!! Yeah!!
Oh and the shower scene was fucking hot! Uhmmmmm! If you ever get to a full on lemon, I may need a shower . . .