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Egads, the angst. I seriously think my heart just broke. This reminds me of a time when I was rejected just like that, so that was not a fun ending for me *crieeeeeees* Except I'd spent like $100 on flipping play tickets and Naruto just had to pay for some frog penises or whatever.

I remember an author's note where you were talking about possible issues with Sasuke that cause you to inflict stuff on him. I feel that way a lot. I have serious unresolved issues with Sasuke. Moving on, I think it was that last chapter and the one before it I snorted so many times, and your author's note at the end about GaaAka LOL. I wish. Gaara was freaking funny at that point. Or is it cuz it's like 4:30 AM? I dunno. But okay, let me be honest, if I were Naruto, I'd be like... fuck this. I understand that Sasuke has his own issues, and that also you probably won't end the story right there cuz that would suck, but... sheesh, Naruto should just respect Sasuke's wishes and freaking find someone who will love him and won't push him away! Like, uh... a house plant? You can stick your dick in some house plants. XD

Damn, I wish I would have maybe ended on chapter 9 or something. That was so depressing. What's worse than being flat out rejected, especially when it's someone you really like and you thought you were doing a good thing. If Sasuke wasn't interested, why did he drag Naruto out to dinner? And why doesn't Naruto have any pride? (am i even talking about this story anymore? let's go with yes!) Overall though, I think this story is really adorable. I love Naruto, Kiba, Gaara, Akamaru, Kakashi, etc... but Sasuke I wanna seriously maim right now. Your Itachi is interesting though, for sure, he's not like super evil brother type, but he apparently has issues. Sasuke sure jerks off a lot, too LOL. BASTARD SASUKE. Maybe Naru should just go date Neji or something. Sasuke really hurt my feelings!!!! *flails* Good story ^_^

I love this story!^^
Please update soon!

I read the first chapter on y-gallery and after reading animehead's comment I looked for you here. I just finished reading everything that you have for this fic and let me tell you that it totally rocks. I would have said something else but thats neither here nor now. I love your characterizations and how you show the inner turmoil in Gaara actually I was cracking up. I liked how he thought that Sasuke deserved to die if he couldn't love Naruto. Anyway I'm stalking you on y!gallery so I can read your stuff there when you post. Can't wait to see the next chapter!

It's pretty impossible to not falling in love with your story even more XD especially with the characterization. As I like a homicidal Gaara but somewhat whipped by and mellowed to his sister ^^ it's just too cute. And I think your HInata's IC. I like it that you made her to be the one who gave the right advice to our resident seme. Will there be a chance for Naruto to meet Itachi after a relationship or whatever we can call it is established? Also, the restaurant incident is made of win <3 I usually don't like ditzy Naruto but somehow you are able to make it believable. And yes, Sasuke's being in denial only makes everything perfect. You know the saying that the harder we deny, the deeper we'll be trapped.

I'm still pretty much confined to bed (I'll post the rest of the story on my personal LJ) although, I'm having an internet connection on my own now. But it's still a dial up! Can you imagine the headache? But beggars can't be chosers XD Oh well, missing you so much too. BUt if you're having either Y! or MSN, I'll be more than happy to chat with you. Just send me e-mail 'k

And lastly, about blowing things up, don't worry you're not alone in this world. In fact, I blew up the chemistry lab in my second year of High School until it couldn't be used for weeks due to the chlorin gas XD and my roommie who happened to major in Computer Engineering is hailed as the Queen of Explosive for blowing at least one circuit in every lab XD

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I sure hope that Naruto doesn't give up!! Sasuke needs to get laid bad!!! :D

The beginning of this chapter? Gold. Naruto's battle against The Dagger. I love Naruto, really. And Gaara XD. He's awesome, and juat wants to be left alone, poor thing. Temari's evil.

And finally... Sasuke! Give in to Sasuke-whore already! Yarg! He's so stubborn and poor Naruto is all wah. Though, it's super interesting to remember this fic was started as a one-shot-ish thing. It's turned out to be really interesting!

O_O whoa lool, I'm sorry I missed reading this before but man sasuke is cold O_O but the restaruant with emos heh that made me laugh really loud and I love your Gaara heh everytime he mentions killing something for some reason all I want to do is hug him. Kiba *sigh* I can't get away from my love of Kiba heh so yeah, I like his relationship with Naruto too and Kakashi was perfect heh - as was Gai. Lol I'm trying to sum up my thoughts of all those chps. ooh and the one that stuck most in my head was the chp. where Naruto had that dream of him and Sasuke heh that defintely had me drooling so yeah :D heh can't wait for the next update ^_^

Hina xXxx

I fricken love this story, when I saw that you updated I went "ZOMG!"... yea, :)
I can't wait until the next chapter is up.

Love the Gaara-akamaru chemistry btw.

aww... thats so sad and after he paid for his dinner too.

Adi you poor dear, I hope you've improved with your exterminets, and we all make mistakes. So have no fear! Poor Naruto and he had his hopes st so high too...hehe gaara wants to kill the puppy hehe...well I do hope something nice happens to Naruto. The evil emos dare to hate him for his golden silky hair...damn you emos and you love for egg-fo yung!