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by Adi

person Aidiya
schedule May 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I totally love the way you did Gaara in this whole story, him watching Akamaru made me snerk. And I was worried for Naruto when he was going to meet Sasuke's parents, well I was more worried for him meeting Sasuke's father. I figured Mikoto would love him, but then they (Naruto and Fuugaku) got along after that awkward start I was so happy. Then only pun I could see would be 'the mission' where Naruto is bummed he can't sneak in like a ninja :) haha I suck. But you did a great job on the whole story. Take Care.
person gwyllion
schedule May 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LMAO!!! The ending killed me! Very witty Adi. Very witty! XD I really enjoyed the time span you gave us on their relationship. They really are a strange pair aren't they. Now.....I must get into your pretty little head to see what you'll be up to next!!! >8) Once again, hurrahe and congrats on your ending!!! A year is a pretty long time! Such dedication deserve great rewards! *flings chocolate covered penises at you* XD
schedule May 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awesome story!
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schedule May 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ha ha ha your story was hilarious!!!! And sad... but mostly hilarious!
I use to absolutely ABHOR narusasu(it pains me just to type it) but lately i've been seeing the appeal in it. I'm having a sort of internal battle about it (yes, i realize how sad it is at how seriously I take my fanfiction). I partially blame this on the majority of sasunaru stories protray Naruto as some doe eyed damsil longing to be held and sheltered away from the world while the ever angsty Sasuke tries to whisk him off his petite little feet. I do admit I love the idea of Naruto needing someone, but he's a man for cripes sake! He's not some blushing little girl who's gonna piss himself at every loud noise!
..........ok, i got a little sidetracked...........uh, great story!
schedule May 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hahahahaha!! The cycle almost begins anew!! (Of course, once Uzumaki returns, young Konohamaru will be way out of league in terms of competition! But still, funny ending!! ^^
person charmpit
schedule May 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOL I need to try that line on a guy to see if it works.

Thank you for the epilogue...I love you Adi.

Please write more fics!
person xpyne
schedule May 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOL ohhhhhh, i love this story!!! it's very funny and sweet and cute and still managed to have a plot and everything~♥ thank you for writing the epilogue! it really wrapped things up and made it that much more satisfying. :D :D and the ending!!! too funny! XDDD
schedule May 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great ending! I felt closure ^_^ I'm looking forward to whatever you write next
schedule May 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*star-struck* I'm dazed. I never even saw what hit me! Oh wait...wait...it was the much-anticipated Epilogue to Conquest! *swoons* You have no idea how much I absolutely ADORE you right now! And you've made me the happiest I have been all week long (I was horribly sick and later I found out that it was a virus that has been going around T-T ). I loved this story from beginning to end...the epilogue really did add to it wonderfully and I loved it so much, I'm reading it all over again! XD *scrolls down the epilogue* God, there were so many parts in here that I laughed for sooo long...I don't think I've ever laughed so much in months! I can't even pick out which parts were my favorite this time! I loved it ALL! Thank you SO much for making the epilogue! *tears of joy* And during the middle of exams, too! Much MUCH luff sent your way. And, for that matter, I hope you did ok on your exams! ^^" Enough rambling! Thank you again! It was a most wondrous, addicting, and humorous read all over!
person tea
schedule April 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay!! They finally had sex!!

Sasuke should sooo be the bottom...though they can take turns later. ^_~

I want to read an epilogue!!!! A happy one with Sasuke as a rich, famous person who doesn't need to give the time of day to his family and having lots of sex with Naruto!!! (please *puppy eyes*)

Thanks for your story!!!