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by Adi

person xpyne
schedule May 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this story is ridiculous, but it makes me laugh honestly in that incredulous, delighted sort of bubbly way, so i just wanted to say thanks and i hope you update soon! <3
person Allys
schedule May 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi XD - I just wanted to come by and give you some love. I can't believe you put that in verbatim, LOL, I was just guessing stats off the top of my head. But it's cute it makes for a really funny picture, very Naruto, LOL. I didn't get the impression that Sasuke wasn't interested, since what he says with he mouth and what hes says with his actions are always completely at odds XD. You don't fantasise about someone you're not attratcted, LOL, I actually think that may be physically impossible XD. But if Naruto does take Hinata's wonderful advice (I still want to huggle that girl) then Sasuke may have to retake stock. He seems to think that Naruto is just a stupid oaf, who happens to be ridiculously sexy on the side. If Naruto can get him to see that he's actually a great guy as well - I think it would only help. A big part of Sasuke's problem, I think anyway, was the dobe's initial approach - I mean "Wanna Fuck?" :sighs: While it is hilariously funny, it's not exactly the best approach for people like Sasuke, maybe if it was Kiba, or someone coming up to Naruto himself, but Sasuke's sort of prickly, O.o LOL XD (pun firmly intended). That would only offend him, it's really fun to watch Naruto dig himself out the hole though XD. LOL, Ja.
schedule May 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very funny story! I love how you have written their personalities and the humor in this story. :)
person Anon
schedule May 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. What will happen next? Hurry with the next chapter!!!
person hisoka
schedule May 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
kakashis got some freaky skittles,and has a way of showin up when somethin good is happening.
updates?
person VRon8899
schedule May 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! -does happy dance- ummm.....movie dates are always fun ^_^; hehe...i'm sure youy could play around with that if u wanted -shrugs- can't wait for the next chapter!
person Anemone
schedule May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*hugs* thanks for updating ^_^ how can itachi creep you out he's so sexy D: i hope to see more updates soon!
person Allys
schedule May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey babe, I'm really glad you decided to keep the spelling, why be something you're not right XD. And I wanted you to have a review. so I had written it earlier:

ZOMG, LOL - Kakashi's point of view is Hilarious and SQUEEE!! NaruSasu action :Happy dancing!!!: LOL I LOVE that Sasuke's body just utterly betrayed him XD. You made me so happy Adi, Thank you. I can't wait for the next one.
person sasumuffin
schedule May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
keep it going! I can't wait to see how Naruto manages to get underneath that ice and just claim the brooding TA. Nicely done. Can't wait for more a.k.a. Hurry up and update please!
person Anon
schedule May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like. A romantic dinner and a walk through the park. That would be nice. Please continue!!!!