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by Adi

schedule May 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like the plot of this story. As for smut...that was lime-ish. No lemon. I think when you do get around to writing the smutfest it will be good. In fact, i'm looking forward to seeing naruto get rid of his pent up passions ^_^
person hisoka
schedule May 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i wonder, will naruto ever give sasuke his bag back?
update?
schedule May 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAYZ!! we got actual masturbating sasuke, with awesome fantasy naruto (because what /else/ would he fantastize about?) mmm and itachi pretty much catching him, though not pointing it out (mmm, *is not-so-closet uchihacest+naruto fangirl*) teehee and OMG naruto is looking at an internship somehow involving Kakashi and company? will sasuke be there? because if he is, im sure they can come up with some awesome ... /experiments/ for them to run 0:) (jess: so THATS what they're callin' it now, *grins*)

yay for udates, and school being over for now. i hope your muses are kind so we can get more. good karma after all...
person Zrina
schedule May 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ahh, the scene is set for the confrontation... err meeting, lol. Those two are so hot together! Love the story, keep going!! :D
person Dragon7
schedule May 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Grate chapter!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so UPDATE SOON..................
person Anon
schedule May 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I wonder when Naruto will give Sasuke his bag back? Hurry with the next chapter!!
person Olivia765
schedule May 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh. Sasuke didn't recognize Naruto. I love that twist. I was a bit dissapointed that you didn't let Sasuke find out the hard way about Itachi & Naruto but that's okay because now Sasuke is going to get the shock of his life. I can't wait for the next chapter.
thank you.
schedule May 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's definitely not good that you're failing exams to write this fic, no matter how good this story is.

But update anyway.
schedule May 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ure failing ure exams to write this? hehehe.. well i find that most of my brainchilds usually are born during or right before my exams.. its this 'nething but study' excuse of mine..neway i love this story.. absolutely love it!! update quickly and how long do we have to go without the smex? :(
person hisoka
schedule May 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nice piece of work i give you an A
updates?