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by Adi

person Nami
schedule May 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awww, Sasuke's like my cat. Who's either as heavy as a sack of weights or... a slippery horrible pain of a noodle just to make my life a little more difficult.

He felt quite suave in this situation, though it would have been better had Sasuke been awake.

I love that line. I was just hunched over laughing for a little while after that. Naruto is a special kind of person, isn't he. And I don't mind waiting on lemon, because this fic is very funny. Your Naruto puts me in a happy place.
person zaccheo
schedule May 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hehe, so now you've put the TA meaning there.

but anyway, this is amusing. and sasuke's an idiot in denial as usual. *kicks sasuke* and ah, shit. i wanna know the reaction of sasuke when he will learn that it's naruto that brought his drunken ass into a decent place to sleep on. but you could also dress naruto up in black and orange since he usually dresses in those colors in the anime.

zacch
person Anon
schedule May 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Sasuke. I wonder how he will react when Naruto tells him what happened? Hurry with the next chapter!!!
schedule May 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So wait till exams are over to continue. I like the story quite a bit. So please continue.
person Dragon7
schedule May 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Grate chapter!!!!Poor Sasuke it's just not his day. I can’t wait to read the next chapter so UPDATE SOON.
person animehead
schedule May 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Would you look at that?! I'm reviewing. I told you I would!

I can't help but to laugh at everything that Naruto does. He and Kiba honestly bring me to tears laughing. Poor pitiful Sasuke. He's not having a very good day. LOL Itachi is good so far. He didn't much, but he rarely does so that's okay. Everyone's personalities are great! I love them. Don't fail your finals!!!
person Allys
schedule May 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOL XD, Lovely - enter Itachi, stage right XD. He is so the smex XD. And I love that Kakashi just popped up out of nowhere on the one day Sasuke needed him to take class. It supports my theory of his omnipotence :D. Naruto getting distracted is the best, and LOL, I'm really happy it's not a oneshot anymore. I can't wait to see what goes through Sasuke's head when he realises he spent the night at Naruto's XD. LOL, you Rock, and hehe XD thanks for putting in the bit about him smelling the shirt it was so cute. til next time - Ja XD.
person Anon
schedule May 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's always really refreshing to find something well written in the fandom. Way to go you, this is interesting and leaves us wanting more. Can't wait for the next installment!
person renzuite
schedule May 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
As much as I enjoy reading this and impatiently anticipate the next chapter, DO NOT miss out on studying for your exams.
schedule May 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
entertaining story. although the plot is nothing i havent really read before, i like the way it's written, with the characters and their perspective in all, esp how "gay" sasuke appears. haha, i never thought of it that way, but it's entirely plausible. and o boy, kiba's HAIRY ass. o_____0 i wish it weren't so, but that's entirely plausible too. eck. lol. keep going with this story. screw finals. hell. i'll fail with you! nah, we'll both pass. :-) best of luck to ya.