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May 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hehehehe....god i just love this story!! ... i can't wait to see wht happens next
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May 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Y-yes you're so nice to me.
*weeps*
*weeps*
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May 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD I LOVE IT! That bit with Gaara was made of pure gold! Nice! Please update soon!
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May 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Happy flailing for updates!! I really am enjoying this fic so far and I liked Sasuke's rant about Kakashi. I laughed when it took Kiba so long to figure out Sasuke was talking about Naruto but then he wasn't thinking of Sasuke like that--he was thinking of Sasuke as guy-who-looks-like-Nejoi-who-wants-to-castrate-me. Anywho...good job so far. I'm really enjoy it. Keep up the good work!
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May 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
All I saw was this sort of strange clothing and hair evolution for Sasuke while drunk. A strange and wonderful evolution. And... Naruto and Aka XDDD *dies*. My friend had a dog like that once... only he was a really old dog. A grandpa, really. But he'd hump just about everything. But but... that scene had me dying. Naruto's so... brilliant. And I'm not surprised that Sasuke knew. Running around in orange like that, you may as well try and spy on someone while toting a small elephant.
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May 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG that was SO kiba, and he's gonna tattle on Sasuke SO SO badly, but he'll probably make naruto suffer for the information first, just to get him back. mmm, naruto's wet dream was tasty, i so almost thought it was actually happening for a second, at the beginning, and i totally went off into delicious-lecture-hal-vouyerism land, because i can imagine sasuke getting off on that, then getting caught by kakashi or something, that would make me giggle (sasuke would be adorable, blushing and stuttering, trying to come up with an explaination ^.^)
kiba and hinata are adorable together, i can totally see them together, being all blushy and cute, kiba can be remarkably sweet, and it strikes me as being IC for him for some reason. teehee. when you started on Sasuke being in the lab i had a vision of naruto popping in to the class, just to be schooled, even if he wasn't in it to begin with. i think kakashi would find that funny. i guess he did pop in in a way though, because he was all OVER uchiha's head. the boys are destined to be together, this IS slash fiction after all
p.s. i prey to you for classroom sex at some point, that would be HAWT ^.^ *total fic love*
kiba and hinata are adorable together, i can totally see them together, being all blushy and cute, kiba can be remarkably sweet, and it strikes me as being IC for him for some reason. teehee. when you started on Sasuke being in the lab i had a vision of naruto popping in to the class, just to be schooled, even if he wasn't in it to begin with. i think kakashi would find that funny. i guess he did pop in in a way though, because he was all OVER uchiha's head. the boys are destined to be together, this IS slash fiction after all
p.s. i prey to you for classroom sex at some point, that would be HAWT ^.^ *total fic love*
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May 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
XD So he told Kiba his problems, eh? Nice. Please update soon!
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May 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Naruto reallyn is trying to win Sasuke albeit a weird way. But, interesting story. Please continue!!
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May 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ZOMG!! Naruto humping Akamaru is just wrong, Hilarious, but oh so wrong, XD. I Love that we got Sasuke's POV this time, I've been wondering about him. I can't wait to see what he's telling Kiba :Grins Evilly: I hope he spills his guts about Naruto, LOL, he'll never hear the end of it. Kiba should totally give Naruto a call. How are you at writing smut? Have you tried it yet? After that little dream sequence I totally think you be good at it. Did you want this to be a long story or more of a ficlet? You should make at least a loose plan, or you'll probably run into some trouble in the future. But probably nothing too solid, cause it won't be as much fun anymore. You're a talented writer, especially when it comes to humour, but everybody needs a plan, even if it's just that you have an idea of where you want the next chapter to go.
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May 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
woot woot. here's to the college life! sleepless nights and party days. haha. anywho, ::clears throat:: this story is pretty entertaining. you have an appealing sense of humor. ^^ splendid first fic. update soon. :-P