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by Adi

schedule March 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
“Besides, I top, or you fail my class.” bwahahaha.. brilliant.
person katwingz
schedule March 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have thoroughly enjoyed reading this tremendously funny and awesome fic and am sad to see that it seems to be at an end. Especially since we never did find out whether or not Neji ever caught Kiba for attempting to deflower Hinata or, for that matter, what Kiba is going to do for a place to live until Neji gets over his homicidal urges. Poor Kiba. But YAY for Naruto and Sasuke!

Obviously, I would be ecstatic if you wrote more for this fic, but I can see why you might want to leave things as they are. I just wanted to let you know that, again, I really enjoyed reading this. You are a wonderful author with a great sense of humor (as well as decent grammar skills, something which seems to be sadly lacking in this day and age, and is a relief to find) and I will definitely look forward to reading more by you in the future, whether it is for this fic or not.

Keep up the good work!

~katwingz (not signed in, sorry!)
schedule March 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Epilogue!
schedule March 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I want an epilogue tooooooooooo!!! This story is great!!! I wonder how kakashi and itachi will react now that sasuke(-whore) and naruto (aka the dagger) are together!!!
person Anon
schedule March 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story and an epiloge would be great.
schedule March 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Did I want smut? - Yes
Was I disappointed? - No

Smut would've been nice, but I didn't feel that the lack of it harmed the story. In fact the final chapter remained consistent with the humour and Sasuke and Naruto's relationship within it. They were butting heads till the very end which was very them and so I didn't feel i'd been duped or anything. Kisses were hot and at the end they served as enough to satisfy me XD I LOVED the fact that when it came to it they didn't have the damn condoms and Naruto had to run out to get them (what a mood kill) and then they come back to get them LOL and they can't decide on who tops.

Also this is something I'd like to mention. For someone who clearly prefers narusasu I was amazed by the equality you kept in your fic because even though in your other fics sasuke remained manly while still being uke, here you gave me the impression that it really was a toss up between who got to top and when i was still expecting the smut i forgot whose work i was reading lol and was wondering who really would top XD i'll just let my imagination fill the gap heh or maybe there might be a hint of who topped or who didn't or who will or whatever lol in the epilogue?

Really want to see that.

So to recap. Love the start ('wanna fuck?' XD) and the end was just as good, the humour and the characterization were the best parts of this fic and Lee's *coughballscough* errr >.> yes.... oooh! and Sasuke's torture at Gai-sensei's hands XD loved that one hehe, and what will always remain with me after reading this?

Sasuke-whore and The Dagger, may they live happily ever after <3

Thanks for the great fic cause it was good till the end (and see if you come out with a new one quick >.>) :)

Hina xXxx
schedule March 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Anything more you can tell me about their story would be greatly appreciated. So, I know I would defiantly be interested in reading an epilogue. So whenever you feel like it, I would be more then happy to read it. On another note dissertation sound painful, hope it went alright.
person gaara89
schedule March 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please do an epilogue!!! This story was sooo good! It'd be sad to see it end just like that! Or maybe I'm just sad it's ending at all, but still, an epilogue would be nice.
person strawberryKIWI
schedule March 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I VOTE EPILOGUE IN CLASSROOM WITH A LABCOAT!
person Iago
schedule March 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aw, I'm sad it ended too. But it's a fantastic fic. I particularly like that both Sasuke and Naruto gave their libidos alter egos (Sasuke-whore and The Dagger). Very cute how they couldn't agree on who would top. Personally, in this story I just assumed Sasuke would bottom the first time. Ah, one can never tell though. Again, loved the story. It's great!