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for Conquest

by Adi

schedule March 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Haha.. what a compromise... neither tops and Sasuke hides the condoms. =^^= hehehehe


This was a highly enjoyable story. Keep up the great work!
schedule March 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have mixed feelings! On one side, I'm happy to have read it all...on the other side, I'm sad to see it come to an end. Not to mention, I think I read all your other fics already too...doggone it.

Well, in the hopes for an epilogue or side story...or for a new story altogether! It was such a great read. I was rooting for both The Dagger and Sasuke's inner whore the whole time.
person Aidiya
schedule March 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha dude I hate fire drills like you wouldn't believe. And that scene in the stairwell was good, I for one voted for the go ahead to execute plan cave man. Naruto's friendly conversation with friends while Sasuke was on top of him made me laugh too. Sasuke's face is going to be rather bruised the next day isn't it? He knows it was totally worth it though. And although I was totally pumped for smex, I really like how it ended without knowing who would top for their first time. Wonderful story Adi!
person Word_Slave
schedule March 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yea!!! so hot.... and I love the Sasuke whore!!!! He's the best!!!
Slave
person Nami
schedule March 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I vote for an epilogue D:! Somewhere along the lines of Sasuke, glasses, and a coat somewhere around the vicinity of a desk :D~~...? Great fic though XD. Loved it from start to finish XD!
schedule March 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wha?? Last one???? I OBJECT! What a mean thing to say :( There will be an epilouge for sure, right? I'm going to miss reading about 'the dagger' ^_^
person lupita
schedule March 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good story!! i loved it and i loved your writing. i loved all the tension. personally, i was hoping for a bigger, more explicit sex scene in the end becuase you pulled off such fabolous sexual tension between the two, but if that's not your writing style than that's cool. good story!! good story!!! kudos on a fabulous story!! all of the characters were awesome...especially gaara lolololol.
schedule March 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*sob* It's the end of an era! Hold me Raoul!
Raoul: Erm, I'm afraid you'll kill me again.
KK: I told you it was accident, now hold me as I angst or get de-bishified!
Raoul: Eep, yes mistress!

I loved this story. I am both happy and sad it's reached its conclusion.
The Dagger and Sasuke-whore have saved me from becoming a spoon obsessed emo on several occasions.
I laughed out loud so many times, I lost count.
Hands down, my favourite thing was Sasuke-whore. The lil prostitute should get his own fic.
That's actually a wonderful idea! Hop it it, chop chop! I command thee!
...
Oh wait...*looks down and sees she's still in the French maid outfit Adi gave her*
Dammit! Raoul!!
Raoul: That's it, I am running sexily away!

person charmpit
schedule March 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Epilogue please!
schedule March 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*tacklglomphumps The Adi*

Epilogue!!!!

This was was wunderbar darling! Yay!!!! I loved it. They're so perfect together in all their wonderful perfection! I'm gonna miss Sasuke whore so much XD

I also hate you just a little right now cause I'm supposed to be working on my nightmare of a paper and you AND Nao had to go and update!!! Evil you are XD

I still love you though. Especially since you updated with such a shiny, shiny chapter full of sexy win!! Heee hee.

Muah!