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March 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a really great story, please update soon. I can't wait to see what happens next.
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March 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love reading this story. Please keep up the excellent work! Lately I've been coming across dud stories. (bad grammar and bad ooc characters) and I need a pick me up!!! So please update soon!!!!
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March 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
jeez way to leave it at a cliffhanger =P I love your story!!! I hope you write more soon!!!!
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March 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
No you SUCK for leaving us at this beautiful cliffhanger...*bawls*
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February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love your story!!!!! I hope you add more chapters soon!
~Rae
~Rae
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February 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i'm kinda mad you left it like that but i guess that makes a story huh? maybe you should write something where naruto get's fucked in the landry room....
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February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
... that was so horrible, leaving it like that.
But at the same time, it was incredibly delicious.
The logical, writer side of me thinks that you ended this beautifully. The whole format is quite well done.
But the fangirl side... is dying and while not wishing death upon you (since the story would cease to continue), sincerely wishes that the next chapter comes along quickly.
I mean really... does Naruto ever finish his laundry?
But at the same time, it was incredibly delicious.
The logical, writer side of me thinks that you ended this beautifully. The whole format is quite well done.
But the fangirl side... is dying and while not wishing death upon you (since the story would cease to continue), sincerely wishes that the next chapter comes along quickly.
I mean really... does Naruto ever finish his laundry?
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February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You cannot end there....please please....no!!! I'm dying for this!! Please!! don't end there....
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February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AAHHH, a cliffe. I hate thoes spcially when it's as good as this! Update soon because I'll go mad thinking about what's going to happen next!Meny yaoi writer who hangs us perverted readers out like this without getting our full pervertedness satisfyed. *In desperation starts to sing, in the to of her lungs* [updte soon, update soon, lalalala, update soon, shalalalalala!]
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February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAIIIIIIII!!!!!!!!!
You evil, eeeeevil woman! How could you end it there?! There better be a lemon to end ALL lemons in the next chapter and... Raoul...is that you?
Rahoul: (!!) No, noooo, I'm Rahoul! I have no idea of this H-less Raoul of which you speak.
KK: Raoul!!!! It is you! I thought I killed you! *hump hump*
Rahoul: Dios mio, she's as insane as ever. Help!!
Random Bishie Doctor: It is okay! For I *rips off shirt* am here!
KK: Squeeeeee!! Bishies!!
As I was saying! This chapter was the best yet! Absolute love and win and bishi-humping. Mega love for Gaara and his homicidal tendencies. We may be hardcore NaruSasu shippers, but we also know that Naruto pwns everyone's ass! Evrything was awesome. The story flowed well, I was giggling like an idiot, and the relationship dynamic is improving by leaps and bounds.
You better hurry up and update, 'cause you know all the stuff I can blackmail you with. DO IT. or I'll simply stab you with a spork!
There was absolutely nothing I would change, and now I'm biting my nails for the lemon you WILL WRITE in the next chap! Lata, luv!!
You evil, eeeeevil woman! How could you end it there?! There better be a lemon to end ALL lemons in the next chapter and... Raoul...is that you?
Rahoul: (!!) No, noooo, I'm Rahoul! I have no idea of this H-less Raoul of which you speak.
KK: Raoul!!!! It is you! I thought I killed you! *hump hump*
Rahoul: Dios mio, she's as insane as ever. Help!!
Random Bishie Doctor: It is okay! For I *rips off shirt* am here!
KK: Squeeeeee!! Bishies!!
As I was saying! This chapter was the best yet! Absolute love and win and bishi-humping. Mega love for Gaara and his homicidal tendencies. We may be hardcore NaruSasu shippers, but we also know that Naruto pwns everyone's ass! Evrything was awesome. The story flowed well, I was giggling like an idiot, and the relationship dynamic is improving by leaps and bounds.
You better hurry up and update, 'cause you know all the stuff I can blackmail you with. DO IT. or I'll simply stab you with a spork!
There was absolutely nothing I would change, and now I'm biting my nails for the lemon you WILL WRITE in the next chap! Lata, luv!!