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February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! YES! Yes!!! FINALLY! Go Sasuke! Woot! All is WELL at this moment in time. Thanks SO much for updating.
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February 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you know.. i could really really murder someone for that cliff hangar!! *runs around in frustration* aaaa!! i totally approve of Sasukewhore.hehe.. i think he's my fav character.
update soon, yeah?
update soon, yeah?
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February 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was an amazing chapter. I love your characterization of Sasuke, trying to seem untouchable when we all really know hes nowhere near it. I also like the balance you've created between him and Naruto. As is in the show, they both have their strengths and weaknesses, and I think you've found a good way to show that off without forcing it down our throats. Generally at this point I would put in some constructive criticism, but honestly I've enjoyed the story so much that I haven't seen any if it is there at all. On another note, my inner whore is still asking for some sex scenes between them, but my sensible mind likes the pace you are taking, and thinks it should stay they same. Can't wait for the next chapter. Goodluck!
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February 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hey! i'm reading now just the second chapter, but i can't not comment! dude! that's so amazing, i can't stop gigglin and laughin and yes my english is horroble but that's not the point, you're so..... wow!!!!!!!!! ok. back to reading.
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February 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*explodes* GAH! I have been waiting for this update for ages! While it was great and all and fun and awesome and yay, you just can't go and put a cliffhanger there! How dare you!!!
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February 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aaaaaaahhhh! You left me hanging, that is not nice. Can't wait for the update, soon please?
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February 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nooooo!! You finally update only to leave us at a cliffhanger! You MUST update soon. I'm really liking this story. ^_^
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February 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have fallen hard and fast for this story. I love the way everything flows so smoothly together. And a cliffy at the end? How could you torture me so? I offer many naked pictures of Sasuke to you in order for a swift update. You, are a incomparable author. Thank you for sharing your talented story with us. I only hope that mine can measure up ^_^
~SwiftFatality
~SwiftFatality
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February 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH noo....no no no no no no no.... not there... not RIGHT THERE! Why???
Do you know how long I've waited? Okay, just as long as everyone else, but finally Sasuke-whore makes a more a good move and you end right there. I might be crying.
I can't wait for more.
Do you know how long I've waited? Okay, just as long as everyone else, but finally Sasuke-whore makes a more a good move and you end right there. I might be crying.
I can't wait for more.
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February 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yay so good