rate_review Reviews

I think there are just not enough stories where Hinata takes control over Naruto. It is always good to see Hinata learn to get over her shy attitude.

awesome

cool, more!

come on you gotta write more

I have just Three words for that story "Sequal sequal sequal" you have got to write a second chapter to this story

It's well written for the most part and keeps the characters relatively in-character. You pulled the overused naked-confessions plot device off well enough for me not to gripe about it (even though that'd be hypocritical of me). My only real complaint is the length, or lack thereof rather. A five-minute-read is nice every now and then, but more is better in this case. The smut was written well and didn't come off too cheesy, and even had what looked like an original idea with the Hinata-bunshin (I say that because I haven't seen that before, but I'm sure someone probably has used it before). In short: good job, write more, and don't slack off on the quality.

great story, i love naru/hina.

lol, weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee spinny chair. smut, glorious pointless smut. Pretty good for this type of story. Sentence structure and grammar are both at more then a decent level so good job!

First off let me say I'm a big fan of Naruto and Hinata. And that in many storys of Naruto making love there are indeed Kage no bushins involved. BUT THAT WAS THE MOST BRILLIANT IDEA OF HINATA AND HINATA KAGE NO BUSHIN ON NARUTO I HAVE SEEN IN A LONG TIME. I loved it, my girlfriend loved it and I think it rocked hard core. Please keep up the great job.