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for Hanging in the Balance

by ursweetheartless

person Menow
schedule August 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good, yes... somewhat intense...but it's just hangin' there. I need closure, please.
schedule May 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
interesting start... you have pique my curiosity and I look forward to how you will continue this. happy writing ^^
schedule May 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i can't wait for more!XP.the story line is amazing!!!!and it is so Fucking good how u had Sakura with Sasuke in and not strait off Naruto.i like it a lot!!!!!!!!
schedule May 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Man, this would be a pretty good set up for a threesome right about now. >:) hehehe
schedule May 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Evil, naughty and very well written. How will this end. I'm almost certain not well, but can't help hoping that all will turn out good in the end.