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for Orochimaru's Booby Trap

by Croup

schedule June 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
There is going to be more right? So far I've been checking this story every time i log onto adult ff but still no update... *sigh* Please continue!
person bla
schedule May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
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zomg please let shika be grabbed by the tentacles as well xD
and I would love to read sasuke's experience with 'the trap'
person prevy number999999999999
schedule May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
gahhhhhhhhhhhhhh..............lol!
i love that ending for chapter2!
person shouta fairy
schedule May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hahaha, good stuff. this is actually the first naruto tentacle fic i've seen, surprisingly enough. >:D it's about time, lol.
person shouta fairy
schedule May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
w00t! keep it coming! i like it a lot so far.
person mary
schedule May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMFG!!!! please keep going with this!!! *massive nosebleed with tears of laughter* it is soooooo awesome!
schedule May 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Is it offending that I found it to be rather hilarious than anything else? Seriously, I couldn't stop laughing for half an hour imagining their situation. Orochimaru implying Sasuke in the similar position was tempting but downright 'ew' if the Snake was off at that. Anyway, could you write a flashback or a part with Sasuke and the tentacles and possibly exclude any Oro/Sasu?

It was extremely well written, light, funny, smutty! Please, update soon!

P.S. What are the pairings?
person devil child
schedule May 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
damn............go tentacle bondage
person VRon8899
schedule May 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hehe...this is *evilly* amusing..please hurry up and update!!