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March 13, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Alright your story sounds good, but your formatting is some sort of funky and really needs to be fixed.
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September 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Is this going to be one of the gender changing fics that ends in pregnancy?
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July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That Was Very...Unique.
Keep It Up!
Keep It Up!
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July 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was a fun read. The he/she thing was a little hard to follow but no real problems beyond that. I wonder how the other girl's night turned out?. Signed a fan of Hinata, Temari, and Kurenai.
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July 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story! All the "he"/"she" got confusing since it was used so much in a row, but that was an amazing story. Too bad you don't wanna add more. A threesome with them all in their normal forms or a 3-girl threesome would be awesome!!! XD
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May 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. And you make a good point about polyamory at the end. Great fic, overall; I especially liked how it was Ino that invented the perverted jutsu.
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May 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I liked this. This was a refreshing, different, entirely sexy take on Sak/Nar/Hin. Thank you for being twisted enough to think it, plan it, and share it. Very very sexy.
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May 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
More chapters please!
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May 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Brava! I'd been thinking about something like this, but not to the degree you did it.
Only complaint, portions of the fic that used the "him" "her" references a lot were difficult to follow smoothly. Not really sure how you could go about fixing that, perhaps just leave the quotes off and trust in the readers to figure it out, or use more proper names, like you did towards the end.
~Laz
Only complaint, portions of the fic that used the "him" "her" references a lot were difficult to follow smoothly. Not really sure how you could go about fixing that, perhaps just leave the quotes off and trust in the readers to figure it out, or use more proper names, like you did towards the end.
~Laz