rate_review Reviews

hey just to let you know the majority of your story has some errors from the codes you used to make the italics and other such stuff.

the only chapter that had no such problems is ch.11. other than that the rest need some help.



Mizu(mary)

Ooh a collaboration! It'll be cool to see your two styles together. I'm really looking forward to your next story. Yeah for Shino/Paige!

*happy dance*

*stalks off to poke CasaHouse with a pointy stick. Gently.*

In the past few days I read your story,and I am thoroughly impressed in your writing style and of your OC. Making Shino the main character in your main pairing is very unusual too, as there are only a few Shino stories out there and your idea is very priginal. The idea of yours using totems must be uniqure and I can only bow my head and congratulate you on such a great idea. I was also very sad now that your story has ended, though I hope that you are already working on the second part, because it would be very interesting , now that she is pregnat, anyway keep your good work up, and I hope to see a new story of yours soon.

I really loved this story too! If you are making any new ones and don't want to use Kate's idea, maybe you could write one about some random guy with a non-japanese name who wanders into the leaf village one day but has a special power nobody knows about!!!1 And have a bunch of the female characters fall head over heels for him because why not? And have him pick TenTen! That'd show 'em... Oh wait... Damn.

Sorry... satire is what I do best.

Love
-Casa

I rally loved this story. are you making any new ones? i would love to read any more you would make. I think it would be cool (if you take any suggestions) that if sakura met a new shinobi that came to the leaf village, and they fell in love. and the shinobi is a musician, and gets sakura into expressing herself by singing. naruto, kikashi, sasuke are all curious and get a little over-protective, and stalkish and could make the story interesting. i have no idea gow i came up with this. but i like reading long stories in the prospective of girls, like you reading totams. let me know what you think!

thanks,
kate

I love the ending! It's perfect! *bows down* Wonderful!

Please tell me you're planning on writing another story after this! I think you're my new favorite writer!

Hehe.

I think that was a beautiful and happy ending to the most awesome story ever. I think that I may have an idea for you but email me and I will tell you. Hopefully what I say will be an inspiration. But back to the review I thought that the end was especially cute and Paige's reaction was very hilarious. Good job on the fic. 10000000000/10

two thumbs up

Awesome! I really hope that you make another story this story was the best!