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Git'er done! Great job on this chapter. I hoope that you let me know when you do another story. You have such a genuine love for your characters that I can see as I read this and it really makes me care about Paige and the others that surround her. Keep up the good work.

Git'er done! Great job on this chapter. I hoope that you let me know when you do another story. You have such a genuine love for your characters that I can see as I read this and it really makes me care about Paige and the others that surround her. Keep up the good work.

Edit-Sorry about the double post but I forgot to put my name and such on the last one. Sumimasen!!! *bows deeply*

Hrmm, I really like your story so far, the only complaints I can come up with is that Hinata seems largely out of character, and the amount of energy you put into explaining the Medicine Wheel more than once, sorry if I offend, it's just.... I kinda don't really like re-reading though explantions and symbolisms that the Medicine Wheel is... I got the fact it is a Meditation device used to empower her abilitys don't need to know that everytime its spoken of... sorry again strong feelings i guess.. but its all good :) i'm Pegan also kinda.. kinda waiting for my brother to teach me more like he promised -.-

I apologize if I seemed as though I was rushing you. Anywho, I just can't seem to find anything that I need to point out here except that this is getting really good.

I just love when my Monday mornings start with a chapter of Totems. Thank you, this is still bunches of fun!

Mmm.. Shino Massages! Paige in one lucky girl! I can't wait for your next chapter! Welcome back from your vacation! :)

wow... make me feel guilty for not commenting why don't you :-) Just wanted to echo the sentiments that it's always amazing to come home to a nice chapter of totems! On a funny note while this chapter was loading I was wondering what was taking so long for a new chapter of "the code". Ill hop over there next and send my regards; So keep up the awesome work.

This chapter had me laughing so much! Two quotes in particular: "..you can keep doing that and make me into a puddle of Paige-goo." and "Thats somehow sweet and psychotic all at the same time." You make all of the characters so lovable. Thanks for the chapter and I cant wait for the next one! And I find Shino in a sort of teaching role just so irresistable...thanks for that!

*laughs* Yay! Shino definitely needs more love, he just doesn't get enough.

And Paige rocks, by the way.

So you're here too! Cool. I really loved this chapter. Fluff! And other stuff . . . hehehehehe . . .