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August 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
No complaints here but I do want to see Kiba get into a drinking contest and get drunk under the table. As for Paige, I hope that she does get some measure of revenge against the ones that killed her friend Tamiko-chan. It just seems like bad things happen to Paige but she is a real trooper and that is what I like about it. And when is Shino gonna quit teasing poor Paige. He puts the move on her and just stops. *Naruto slaps me upside the head and tells me Shino didn't want to rush Paige.* That hurt!
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August 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
XD ..............unwrapping a present. definitely the perfect analogy for Shino. Great stuff, as always. Your standard is consistently high, I can't wait to see what comes next. At least Paige is able to get away without wearing one but I'm sure she'll come to appreciate Hinatas gift ^_^
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August 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love chapters of down time like this one! Some authors just don't realize how important they can be. You do however so bravo!! yay for the new chapter! and yay for you getting settled again! see you next chappie!
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August 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ok I offically want one of the coats!! Loved the chapter.
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August 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Tami-Chan!!! That's sad but that kinda thing does happen. Death knows no age. Anyway this is a great chapter!! I can't wait to read more!! Please hurry with the next chapter!!
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August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Once again you display this wonderful ability to involve you reader emotionally, and surprise the hell out of us at the same time. Thank you, this was sad but very well written and thought out. Sqwee for Aburame cuteness.
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August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow.... just, wow.... different than most fictions that I like, but has some of the best character development and writing that I have seen in a long time, and I realize it takes some real foresight and talent to integrate a believable OC well; Between this and "The Code" I might start looking for more good OCs :-). Definitely getting bookmarked.Keep up the great work!
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August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was beautifully heart-wrenching. *sniff* Tami-chan :( Paige is learning precisely that a shinobi village is a military one and the death toll is high no matter how powerful the ninja. Congratulations on twenty updates!!! *throws confetti* Think how many authors fail to get that far, I hope you feel very proud, here's to twenty more ;) Long may the tale of Paige and the sexy entomologist run.
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August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I was about to cry when I read this chapter. It was so sad when Tamiko died after making friends with Paige. The story is shaping up to be a masterpiece. On a better note, I hope that whatever bad things that were happening to you have ceased to bother you. Keep up the good work and if you ever need to talk about anything that is bothering you email me and I will do what I can. 10000000000/10 stars for the chapter.
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August 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love it!!!Best story I've read so far.Update soon please.